I shall be honest Im reading this story on bits but I am really enjoying it. Expecially this chapter, was nice to smile once, because it did actually make me laugh. Especially the bit where you described how Yuna bounced back up and past a surprised lulu and Wakka. :D

O_o dude!

What a twist indeed. For a moment I though Auron had formed too... haha. wow. I love the twist!

Omg please update this :o

...This fic is pure rock on so many levels. I like how it's all angsty, especially in the first half, but still has the extreme badassitude of Auron, particularly in the last chapter.

You have a way with words which makes it possible to vividly visualise the scene, and a cool plot too. Which we all know is something rare on this site. It's a shame, though, that this doesn't look like it's likely to get updated...(Oh yeah, and when is PYLO...?)

Thanks to you, I feel a mad FFX obsession coming on. Now, where did I put that game...

Im going to shoot myself for not reviewing.

(I read this ages ago)
In any case, SWORDCHUCKS YES! I do love 8bit.

Things seem to be unravelling a bit, angsty-drama wise, but that's okay. We can all take a break from that. I do love Yuna in a hamster-ball.

Hello,

I love your work so far. I personally haven't played Final Fantasy X but from what I can see your description of the characters are all realistic and very believable. I also have to commend you on the outstanding detail you put into the overall description of the environments.

You moved me to the point of tears in the last few chapters, excluding chapter 34 which seems to have a slightly lighter feel--as did chapter 33. And in general I just think you're a groundbreaking author.

So take the time to read this, because I certainly spent some time mulling over what I should say to you in my review.

Besides all that, I hope to do a collaboration with you sometime because your writing touched me THAT much.

Keep up the good work and please don't ever stop writing such timeless fictions.

- TerrisMoon

Bravo, well done!
My only criticism (constructive of course) is that Seymour sounds just a tad too insane. Drawing from his appearances in the game, he is a very controlled individual. But if you do look at it in the context of this story and his impending madness upon gaining so much power and wanting to destroy everyone, it makes perfect sense. However, the transition is a bit jarring when you come from playing the game. (I was hugging it only two days ago).
In any case, I loved your descriptions, the interactions and reactions of the characters. Auron, as always, is impeccably done, I could see him confronting Seymour with a cool concentrated gaze. You've also given Tidus some credit to his character, which is hard to do. Great job.

Oh WOW. I left off all that time back because I figured like any good writer you were having some trouble with getting out what you really wanted to say. And well, frankly, this story got lost in the sands of time. I did however, remember the title and came back for you, and look at how much you've updated! Hopefully you'll read this in email form, but it's really wonderful and I'm going to finish up what you've gotten out so far.

Wow, what a great story! Auron is love! *hugs Auron who stands there stoically* Come to think of it, Yuna and Auron would make a veery interesting couple. Don't know why I didn't think of it before. I look forward to more from you!

cool!Auron rocks hes the man!^^update soon!

this chapter was super funny!yuna. hamster ball.yeah when you do draw it can i see it?anyways can you update fast cause i have school!auron ryhming...hehe... what happened to tidus,jecht and braska?

hey just read this fic.i thought it was tidus!me and my classmate laughed when we figured it was sir auron!she was like "what the freak!i got fooled!" just wonderin is this a yunaxauron they make an interesting couple.but i still like yunaxtidus!

I'm so glad this story is getting updated again. It's never nice to see a great story sink into the oblivion of the unfinished--especially when it has Auron in it. Especially Auron kicking ** and, admittedly, getting kicked. I sort of like it when life's not nice to him. I know, I'm a horrible person.

Yuna-swatting was hilarious, by the way. Had me giggling in front of my computer and now my co-workers think I've gone mad. Oh well.

I don't think all dragons are bad. I think some dragons are sort of cool. Like Bahamut. But this particular Drake deserved to die because it tried to eat Auron.

Keep the story going. Cheers!

ROFL. Hamster ball...hehe. Wow, that would be intense. I'd probably have been laughing the whole time though. I love this. update.

Regarding the review before me...good stories must have "down time", so that you appreciate the exciting bits all the more.

First, I am glad you updated!

It's interesting how you wrote this chapter...I don't know if I've ever seen anyone attempt an actual "cloister of trials". That, and the fact that this chapter is mostly dialogue-driven really feels like it's playing out as the game.

I like that you re-addressed the curse near the end, which piques up ears, of course.

Nitpicking: wrapping his huge hands around her wait to lift her down.

I think you meant "waist". :)