This was brilliant! I hope that you will add more to this "series", or at least another one shot.

I have no idea where this is going and that is precisely why I am excited. With such provenance, it can only be someplace wondrous. Good luck!

Your writing is beautiful-musical. Your word choice and cadence makes me think of the film itself. I didn't know quite what was going on...kind of felt like I was catching glimpses of the plot out of the corner of my eye. But I liked that feeling. It's vague and paced and really, really well written. Do continue!

This story is very good so far, keep going!