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Maniacal Dragon 2003-03-16 . chapter 10
LIDGE YOU **! ... This was too sad.. ;.; .. Dai.. *cries* .. I realized something.. I can't enjoy reading this series because I'm too emotionally wrapped up in it. It's sheer torture, I just want to get through it, find out what happened and all that.. it's not a piece of fiction anymore, it's the chronicles of people I know and care about and.. that's painyful. But.. it is very good.. very good job, as usual.. you are amazing. u.u
CrimsonObsession 2003-02-28 . chapter 9
.Just as powerful an ending as I've come to expect from you, AF ^_^. This was an incredible story, and I'm so glad I finally got the chance to finish it! So.what's next in the saga of Kaalae, hmm? WRITE MORE! You must, you abosolutely must! Even though there's still some of your recent stuff I haven't gotten to yet.um.I think I'll do that this weekend, heh. But that doesn't excuse you from writing more! [crosses arms and looks all stern and Zim-ish] Speaking of which.[huggles Zimmy] I loved his cameos in this, heh. The ending definitely makes sense XD.
Molly 2003-01-11 . chapter 9
Very good. Very moving. Wikki shouldn't have had to die.
BRING BACK JENDAI, GOD DAMMIT!
Maniacal Dragon 2002-12-23 . chapter 9
Very good!! It spiffily totally rocked!! Only there was too much Min and I was worried about Zim. 6.6 But that's me. u.u;; It's only this particular spinoff's past self, but this spinoff is my willful pupil and he is trying.. and I worry!!!!!!!!!
hoheehum 2002-12-15 . chapter 8
YAY!!! NEW CHAPTER!!! (this WAS supposed to be for ch. 9, but... eh, my comp is screwy)
I know I haven't reviewed before, and I'm REALLY sorry, but it's because I don't have enough time to stay online and read the entire Kaalae trilogy. So, seeing as I just seem to be unable to put it down, I had to print the whole thing out... Size 7 font, it was 77 pages, printing on both sides, I narrowed it down to only using 39 sheets of paper. GO ME THE TREE HUGGER! I finshed it just about a week ago. And... WOW. um... yeah. But the point is, this story, simply put, is one of the best- if not THE best -fics I've ever read on this website. The whole trilogy is just incredible. You develope characters well, create believable scenarios, and wove the entire thing together magNIFICENTLY (ooh! happy word!).
You really deserve a LOT of credit for this. Jhonen may have contributed, but this it YOUR brainchild. *bows* keep up the AWESOME work, I'm really looking forward to more about this *drools* Kaalae we all love so VEEEERY dearly. *drools some more* (mmmmm- YUMMY!) so be sure to avidly avoid the brain worms- your brain meats are necessary for this wonderful story to continue.
yer #1 fan,(EEK!)
hoheehum
Kat23a 2002-09-25 . chapter 1
*Chapter 4 reviewness*
-Hehe...'Impending Dooky or Doom'
-Min's all grown up! And with a student! ^__^
-"Both of you shut your mouths before I get over there and do it with my welding torch," *grins*Go, Lidge!
-Ooo...I like Pira already. Art is good!
-*happy sigh* This trilogy is absolutely wonderful. ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

-*is on chapter 5 now*
-O.O Zim!?
-EEP! *crosses her fingers for the student*
-O.O' *wonders if she was crossing her fingers for the wrong guy*
-*watches the battle scene on the edge of her seat* Gad, you are SO good at writing battles! HOW? *resumes watching*
-*smiles a bit* Hmm...I like the imagery of Min living where Jendai lived..

CHAPTER SIIIIX!!
-"There was not one Irken on the planet who liked being woken up." XD! I can agree with that...
-Hehe...*tries to imagine waking up with backpod legs splayed all over*
-Awww....*reading the Pira-and-Regert bit*
-AWWWwwww....*reading the Purple-and-Swar bit*
-Oh, hey I wouldn't have thought of the bars for Irkens to hang with their robotic legs. Wow.
-"An entire week could pass or half the planet could blow up and Min wouldn't notice, as long as his work was not disturbed." >.O That reminds me way too much of my dad...
-YEE! PIRA! O.O

CHAPTER WHATEVER'S NEXT!
-SEVEN! CHAPTER SEVEN!
-Zim? In a library? Oo
-eep! Premonitions NOT good. And WHAT about ahki and uthane?

Numero Oche:
-"Uthane... what on Irk is uthane? I... uthane..." Yeah, that's just what I said...
-*listens to the description of uthane* O.O I think I have an idea of what's gonna happen..I don't like it..
-Oh! Impending Doom is going on right NOW!^_^ I love it when stories intertwine..
-"Too bad most of them would have such terrible hangovers?!" Uh-oh. O.O
-I just gotta say this now, before I read any more: You are MASTER of suspense! ^.^
-ZIM?! *thinks for a moment* Oh...Ziiiiiim....*looks all understanding*
-XD! ZIM is AMAZING! XD!!!!
-Wow. That "all who bear the Kaalae name are born to suffer.." line is...sheesh, I don't KNOW what it is. But I like it.
-ACK! ZIMMY RAMPAGE!!
-NO! MIN! *stares and read more*
-ACK! NOOO! WHY DID YOU STOP!!! *convulses*
Maniacal Dragon 2002-09-24 . chapter 8
This chapter was so sad.. 6.6 And, and.. poor Zim. I never ever knew he was drugged. (the one on the show obviously wasn't.. but I hate him and I love your Zim) I read this chapter a while before you put it as you know so I'm not being all emotional.. else I really WOULD be. o.o Cuz I was then. Or.. something.. poor moosh-head.. I feel so bad for him.

*whaps Lidge with a werepillow* Okay, my review is now complete.
Ryn the Spook 2002-09-24 . chapter 8
OOOOoooooooooooooooOOOOOO i like it! cliffhangers are baaaaaaad though. Update soon!
Celelorien 2002-09-24 . chapter 8
AAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!! So THAT'S what happened to Zimu! nngh! of COURSE they would be the last ones... *cry* I hope he makes it through okay, he's just GOT to! he's got to give his name to Pira so it doesn't die.. he's gotta stop Zim! Poor Min though, so much pain... Kaalae is indeed a proud name, but also a painful one. I hope they'll all be okay in the end... DARNIT LIDGE WHY DINCHA LISTEN TO CEROL?!? daagh... she's going to have to deal with the guilt though, so foof. They better make it out okay, dagummit! *glares eeeevilly at Aliet* If you kill Min, Pira, Kaml, Regert, Shil, or any of them, I will... I will... I DUNNO! do bad stuff to your legs! I will, too. *sigh* i can't WAIT for the next chapter! *sniffle*
KuroiAzarashi 2002-08-20 . chapter 7
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-*hah*-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Poor Cerol...*Sniff* Poor Zim...*Sob* Poor Min... *Cry* Why is Lidge so mean? Didn't Kam teach her love? Compassion? Feelings!!!? ARGH! You had to leave off there! NOOOOOOOOOOOO! I like it so far! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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Well, I feel better now. Write soon or screaming temporal doom will be rained down upon your doomy head! Bye bye now! I will update soon too! Yay for me! I get back on Monday! Update Monday too! Yeah! SUGAH is Good! YAY! *Hold Head* Ow...headache...
Narcotics 2002-08-11 . chapter 7
You know how I feel about your genius! This scared me! I WAS SCARED! Listen to Cerol! Listen to him! He knows! Anyone with one spooky discolored, blind eye tells me I will kill millions, I stop baby! No doubt! Man I hope things go ok for these poor guys
SpookyTrinity 2002-08-09 . chapter 2
Whoa your this is great, it even made me...not hyper *gasp* twas sad. i cried when Wikki died aaaaaawwwwwwwwww *cries more* thats pretty much how i judge fics, it's REALLY well written if it can make me cry, laugh out loud, smile, gasp, or even scream at the computer screen...(this is the best part) you have officially won The Award of Spiffyness. (whooooo, what an honor) Write more soon!!!!!!!
SpookyTrinity 2002-08-09 . chapter 7
Wow. This is probably the best fic i've seen in a long time. Your other fics are good too but this is my favorite. The style, how you portrayed the characters, the storyline, dialogue,...everything is done wonderfuly. Please continue soon!!!
Purple's Right Hand Girl 2002-08-09 . chapter 7
PRHG: YAY!!! Zim was in this chappie!!!

Purple: Hmm.... I wonder when it's going to get to Impending Doom?

Red: *sighs* Oh no.... that's when youknowwho strikes.

PRHG: *sighs* LEAVE ZIM ALONE!!! He has problems you know.

The Tallests: We know....
Maniacal Dragon 2002-06-26 . chapter 6
*sniff* Min.. and.. Pira.. geez I can't read any of these stories without getting way too into them.. Soldiers.. Students.. it all hits way too close to home for some reason.. o.o

Lidge has got good charisma, huh? Like Hitler. I still don't like her.. 6.6 Lidge's war, huh? Now I REALLY don't like her.. but I sorta admire her in a way.. lessee.. *searchs around and whaps Lidge with a portable phone* Okay.

Very awesome job as usual Aliet.. you are an amazing writer! Me and Aubri were talking some details over. Like that undersuit.. male Students wear 'em too.. all Irkens do.. Jendai's just weird and been on Earth too long with his triangle boxers XD I loves him.. I love them all. I love everything and everyone! I will explode with so much love and happiness and peace! *hugs everyone* I love you too Lidge! I trrrrryyyy!!
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