OMG Cris! I love it. It's awesome. I so can't wait to read where this is going. Thank you again 4 the wonderful gift.

oh no! What is Charlie and or horrible disgusting Jacob going to do? I really like this. i almost cried over the dress too, by the way. I could just imagine her all happy to look pretty fothe party, for edward. But even more, the hurt that her own father would do that to her, it really broke my heart. I'm looking forward t more.

Sounds as if Charlie's done something really bad. Great start . Update soon please.