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| snoetiger 2008-01-08 ch 1,  | abusefour stars good use of * * for when yeerk/host talked to each other you should read visser |
| alicia the andalite 2006-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseAsh, you are awesome! I liked this short story a lot and it really moved me. It was good how you saved the revelation that the boy was Marco until the end and the descriptions of Visser One's thoughts were very deatiled and touching. |
| lady scribe of avandell 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseum...why is this in the eomer/lothiriel section of lotr? |
| scarletswitchblade 2003-08-04 ch 1, | abusethis particular story is not korny its sad filled with sorw. but fantastic |
| Cloud Albatou 2003-01-03 ch 1, | abuse^_^I really liked this. You gave a more...emotional look to the normaly appearing harsh Visser One. ^_^Fantastic work, I loved it!^_~ |
| Bookworm85 2002-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe end really surprised me. It's kinda sad though, that Laura didn't recognize Marco. It's sweet that she got to see him even though she didn't know it. |
| Anifan1 2001-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it, it was amazing and beautiful and incredible. |
| cleo 2001-04-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseDamn. This is the kind of fic which I dunno what to write after reading, coz it's so damn good that I can't find any words to describe it. So lemme just describe your fic as undescribible. I mean...when I was reading it I just had some weird uncontrollable urge to smile, and yet, being the big crybaby I am, I felt like crying too. At the ending, there was a big lump in my throat and I leanrt the meaning of " tugging at your heart's strings", but I still had that weird smile on my face. I've always believe there was more to Visser 1 than the evil-ruler-of-the-glalaxy front, and it seems you share my sentiments too. I hope you continue writing fics like this about the visser. You sure have a lotta talent. Okay, I'd better stop now before I write a review longer than the fic *grinz*. |
| Foxfire 2001-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great, never stop writing! Even if you stop writing Animorphs, always write, you have the talent, someday you will be greater then Applegate, I loved this story. Yes I thought the boy might be Marco, but it was still a great story. If you ever stop writing I will be very sad. Do not hide your gift. Show the world what you can do. |
| SMS 2000-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abusecool story. I liked it but I wanna piont out- Marco's mother's m\name is Eva and Eva always addresses Visser One as Edriss(sp?) |