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| Reviews for Dead Space: The Complete Novelization |
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  Ty 4/17/13 . chapter 12 Well I have to say you are a very good writer, you've done a great job with this story. I think the chapters are perfect length and I've found my self losing time with your writing, however there are a few things I would suggest changing. Your perspective is good, I've seen a lot of writing where the perspective is off all the time, I've only found small things here and there. One example was the Line where you said "Try thinking of something and telling Isaac if you don't think so, because that's what they would be called." Humorus as it was it just didn't seem to fit. You have occasionally awkward phrases, but you'll get better at that as you write, and keep writing! I enthusiastically encourage you to continue writing and I am excited to read the rest of this story, keep up the fantastic work! Ty |
| FOOD 8/17/12 . chapter 12 you are doing epic, keep writing more. |
| Guest 8/17/12 . chapter 11 it is creepy enough for me, you dont need to change a thing. |
| Guest 7/24/12 . chapter 12 This is a great story so far please update ASAP |
| Guest 7/24/12 . chapter 10 This was a great chapter and my personal favorite |
| Guest 7/24/12 . chapter 4 Fantastic |
| michael 7/23/12 . chapter 12 Just finished reading it so far. Really good! Can't wait for more |
| Guest 7/15/12 . chapter 1 the story is awsome! but can you work on the never ending pokemon romance story more. thanks. you the best writer ever! |
| NameLuke 7/13/12 . chapter 12 I love how you made an awesome game storie line into a discriptive novel, very well done. |
| Michael 7/8/12 . chapter 1 Flippin cool well done, keep it up! |
 OP Inc 7/5/12 . chapter 12This is such an intriguing and interesting story. You add a whole new depth to the game's original story. Keep up the good work. |
| anonymuss 6/14/12 . chapter 12 This story is so beautiful its almost poetry. Please updates this, you are like Edgar Allen Poe reincarnated |
| odalys-ortiz 5/26/12 . chapter 12 I have to say that this is another great chapter for this story. Plz update soon:D |
| Ranger-A13 5/4/12 . chapter 12 I love the Dead Space series. Surprising how Issac goes through all that he did and still having the will to survive. Love this story because it gives Issac some speech. Keep up the good work. |
| Micah Delgado 4/19/12 . chapter 12 This review is WAAAAAAYYYYY overdue. This story is awesome, you capture each horriv moment and make it your own, the emotions of Nicole clearly set up the trajady at the end of the game. THE BEST Dead Space fanfic out there in my opinion. Maybe after this story you could make Dead Space 2 complete novelization? Just a thought. |
