Its good you should seen where it goes.

well the main issue you want to go address is the setting? will naruto and a group of people leave the village to fight Naga, or will YJ stay in the elemental nations to fight? next is good or evil. Ninja's are ususally a gray area. neither good nor evil. they just work like mercenaries. so, tecnacally speaking, Naruto's group could be against YJ and the light. lastly, there's time frame and abilitys. you may have said academy, but you made them seem like they've been out of teh academy for a while. my best guess, this is eather an alternate universt where the academy is longer, but academy students can get missions. or this takes place after the war, where there is peace in the elemental nations. so please, take you pick and get the backstory right, then after that is all set, you can ask for more help and people will gladly give you sujuestions. as for my sugjuestion, I say have natuo's group just be a group of his friends who act as basic mercenaries. they firhgt YJ from time to time, and soemtime help them. anyway, keep goin and stay golden

Well done! I can see the makings of a great story coming into play! Can't wait to see Young Justice's reactions to the Naruto cast, 'specialy Rock Lee. He's just so akwards XD.

You don't need to put 'He said' or 'She said' afte every sentence. Give the characters more emotion. I counted alot of grammar and spelling errors, so I would go back and edit that. I recommend you read a book called Spilling Ink, it's a guide how to write better.

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i like ur idea, very original :) the writing seems good and i dont believe i saw any errors (idk if i did i might've ignored it...) so its all good:)

as for villian suggestions...

kabuto could like... be all kabuto-y and help out kobra and maybe betray them for orochimaru or something

i dont like him:) but i like ur story :D

Very interesting start. I assume this is the Blockbuster/Venom combination formula that Kobra was trying to sell to the Shinobi. I also like Kid Flash and Superboy in the exchange about "real ninja" I'll be keeping an eye on this one buddy.

Interesting. You've peaked my interest. Can't wait to read what happens next.

This is really good! Happy 100th! Selling them that drug stuff? That's a cheap way to become the best at the academy! I'm really glad they didn't accept! But now where is he... XD