Ok...WOW, I don't even know if you will get this reveiw, but why in the world have you not finished this story. It has captured my attention and broke my heart! I have been on this site reading for a while now, and this is the first review I have given. I am so upset that it isn't finished. I know that It is an old story, but please, please, please, if you get this review finish this story PLEASE!!

I read this quite some time ago and fell in love, but I was a bad fanfic-er and did not review. So I am making up for my previous bad behavior and reviewing it now.

Alright so here goes...

First of all, the reality you've created seems so real, so tangible, so completely believable. The way you bounce back and forth, weaving the past in with the present, moving towards what I hope is a reunion, be it happy or angsty, I'm really not picky.

You have captured Marie's voice quite well. And how you manage to get inside Logan's head with such ease is beyond me. Nothing either of them says or thinks, none of their emotions, feels out of character. It all feels real. I doubt it's news to you, but I find your language borders on poetic at times.

I hate asking, but when are you planning to continue this story? Please put us (me) out of our (my) misery soon!

Anyhow, this is beautiful work, darkstar.

This is masterful. A true gem amongst the many (admittedly crappy) pieces of writing out there. Please, please, please, continue! Your writing has now become one of my favorites, and I am dying to see more :)

This is good writting, it's sweet and painful, u must keep this up! It's has been a while since u've updated last, do you think the next chapter will be up soon?
Well, to tell u the truth, this is the best fanfiction I've ever read, so I'll be checking up if u have any original fiction out. And by the way, whish u a happy New Year

it's just exquisite.

it's sad. Will logan find her?

Wow...this is so good. It really reminds me of the book "Handmaid's Tale" by Margerat Atwood I really enjoyed every minute of this so far. I really hope you update soon!!!

I cried again. I really, really, really, really hope you write more soon. Please?

I cried again. I really, really, really, really hope you write more soon. Please?

I wasn't planning on reviewing more, since I usually don't review more than once in a while, and certainly not often in the same story. But this time I felt obligated to, since you did such a beautiful job that I started sobbing when he shot himself. I mean, full-out crying, which I've only done maybe two other times in my life while reading a piece. And the memories you put in there are so bittersweet. I'm really loving this story, depressing as it is.

This story is beautifully, hauntingly written. The first part almost reminded me of The Handmaid's Tale, by Margaret Atwood, which is another story about a male-dominated world, if you haven't read it. I've been reading your other stories, for Alias(sorry! silent reader), and I love the way you write. I'm going to go read the next chapter now...

i'm on the edge of my seat waiting for Logan and Marie to meet.

awwwwwwwww please continue soon please