There is no April 31st, I'm hoping you meant May 1st and weren't saying April 31st as a way of saying you were discontinuing the story because I think it's a great concept. But, I think if you left out the the part were you say it's not like the movie, it would make for a great twist at the end.

This is really good although the spacing is kinda annoying, any way keep updating I am loving this story.

This is an excellent concept, but it is too confusing to read. You have no punctuation so it's hard to tell who's speaking, if they are speaking, or just thinking or describing. kind of annoying actually. i say you need a beta.

i.e) "live a little Rose.. its time to enjoy ourselfs" You mean Peyton, right? & It is spelled 'ourselves.'

If you need a beta, I'll gladly do it, because i really believe in this story's idea, just it needs a bit of work.

Really enjoying the story. Can't wait for more. Update soon!

eek! i lvoe it!

hmm..good story! whats the plot line for htis fic?