i love this.. i wish u'll update before i go to school. (HAHA) :)..it's a good story and i wonder what are you planning on them.. :D i just wish the ending for this will be a happy one. :)

-ur awesome!

good story

i just wanna say this is an amazing story. I read it a little while ago, and I'm gonna read it once more. It's just... awesome. I dunno how else to describe it.

You're great at writing! I'll check out some of your other stories:)

Cute. Very cute. I've always identified with Jessie, and now you've confirmed it: I am such a chicken on roller coasters. Oh, and about the comment from Mr. Willis of Ohio, Jessie and Grace were not on the same soccer team. Jessie was on the freshman team in year 2 of the show.

Couple of things. Rick & Lily would never let a boy spend the night! Also Grace played soccer with Jessie back in season one. They never really mentioned soccer after the first season. So not sure if they still were playing. However if they still were than Grace would've already known about Katie's bruise.

Just wondering is this a new take on how they met (not as O&A gospel)? Secondly Jessie had been going to same schools as Grace. So would've been starting High School (guess that would be new, though), but as a Freshman. Also I don't think that Jessie & Katie were ever in any of the same classes. Grace & Katie were however since both were in same grade. I liked the interactions and they actually sounded like they would on the show.

Thanks for the update, I'm glad they finally had sex, and I'm glad they act like a couple, like a couple in love and happy. Too bad there was no details...

I wonder if Katie's demons are coming back...

Yep, I'm still reading and still loving it. So sorry I have been such a bad responder. I like the last two chapters - they feel like what I would want the show to be like. And I definitely am looking forward to the last chapters, so keep writing, PLEASE.

-Brokenpath

I'm so glad you continue writing this story.

I love how much Jesse loves Katie, she's nurturing and sweet, and I think she'd do anything for her. I just hope she doesn't go too slow on Katie because well...as you know they're hot and those make out sessions should go further :)

Thanks for writing and please update soon.

really good chapter. pms :)

Amazing. Your really talented and this is deff one of the best fics i've read in a long time. please update asap.

very interesting chapter it reminded me of degrassi tng when paige confronts ellie. i wonder if jessie will tell tad, i hope she does, it will make things more interesting. anyways, great chapter and update soon.

Its taken me a while to get over chapter 6 due to personal reasoning, to where as it hit kinda close to home. But I am back because I didnt want the author of this fic to be let down since she has obviously put her heart and soul into this story.

So I think its way too cute the way Jessie is all overprotective of Katie. Her lines of friend and girlfriend are blurred but its okay cuz its all out of love. And it was due for katie to have to let her know she was smothering her but as usual she did it in true Katie fashion as to not hurt Jessie's feelings because Katie could tell it was coming from a place of love. So the deep dark secret is out and has a breathing life. But Jessie's feelings fore Katie will kick that old terrible dark side in its ass and bring Katie to the light. Good chapter with the girls talking and crying and talking.

Im not sure what to say. Im at a loss for words actually. It was as if my heart was being pinched. It hurt reading this chapter. it was good but really kinda painful. I kniow this isnt much of a review and Im sorry about that.

awesome chapter! update soon (: