i want this finished now please!

it was getting good! please update!

You've got a good concept, but you should pay attention to spelling and the capitalization at the beginning of sentences and also of names and proper nouns. There are also a few places where you need to use apostrophes to show the possessive nature of the noun. The story itself is great, though. Good work!

whats next

I like the whole cosmos thing.

Hurry up and write already.

Pleeaz

cool begining continue writing i'll be checking

hey, just read your two chapters. sonds good so far. can't wait to see her traing a little.

zilla

I hope u update really soon

Love it hurry up with the chapters! MAKE THE INNERS AND TUX BOY PAY!1

Okay, since you reveiwed Miss Independent asking, "Who was it sung by though?" Or something like that, I shall tell you. Kelly Clarkson. But in the music video she kinda looks like Michelle Branch. O.o And the reason why I reveiwed your Sailor Moon story is because I saw that it had the most reveiws so... yeah. I dun like Sailor Moon that much tho but whatever.

Hello!

Well, listen now, I must thank you first for reviewing my story, but I wuld be very much glad if you would FINISH YOURS!

How does that sounds?

I want to know what Mask thinks, nad the others and when will they find out the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth?

Oh, well... JUST UPDATE!

KISS

Very interesting, but are you going to update?

add new chapter

hmm...interesting i love it good work update soon. Eo