This is too good for just one chapter. I still love it though!

i love this!

I Loved that story so so so so so so so so so much! It was so Amazing! I didn't stop reading I was so into it I couldn't take my eyes off of it. I have no idea how you came 3rd you should of camE 1st because the people who cam first must of been from another planet to came first! It was so Everything! :)

i really really really really looooooved this story,its soo good n perfect.

so glad u won even if it was third place:)

What a wild ride!

I loved it :)

I wonder what happens next.

I suppose my imagination can come up with something..

Thank you very much for the story!

Great history! I am charmed with edward is so overprotective and sweet! Enjoyment reading!maru..

WOW! This was a really good story!

awwww the ending was soo cute :D I loved it :D UPDATE!:D

I loved it so good thank you

Awww...it was such an awesome story...loved it3

Aw! That sweet. Great story. Well done.

Has promise for a multi chapter story with the Jake situation too.

oh man this was awesome! i just wish there was more-like at least 1 more chapter! Edwards gotta see his parents again & Bella meet them, too. everyone finding out her & Edward are together & that he found out what was Really wrong with Charlie. oh! & jake saying he'd come after Bella! see theres more!

oh & birth control doesn't Always work...hint hint

lol yep no pressure here _ but truly if u ever do i would SO tell people to read it!

thanks for the great story!

I'm gushing...a story has to be good if Jacob is being a complete Dbag and you don't even care because...the 2 of them! and how i'n live they are *sigh* see? Gushing...I can see themworking together for the rest of their lives...*sigh*

I love the story

I liked it it was kinda gross about the bug thing ,but it was well written and Edward and Bella blended so well . I had to laugh at Bella and the chickens too! Alice glad you stepped in to help things along!