AWWW!

But I think u meant Pneumonia not ammonia.

Ammonia is pee.

So u were looking for pneumonia xD

Good story tho!

Sniff... That was sad! I agree! I think it would be great if you made another story but with a happy ending! Yeah, many made happy stories with fluff and stuff but its nice to see another! :) Very good job :)

waah! too sad...anyway,loved it.

. !ahhhhh u know wat u did a goode job even though it was sad think u can do another kyo/haru?hapy ending this time?goood job anyways ciao! sakura