Great story!

I absolutely LOOOOOOVED this story. I adore your style of writing and how you stayed true to the characters' personalities. :D

This was a great story!

Very cute! Love it!

lovedd this so so much. good job, even if you wrote it a LONG time ago xD

very nice!

What a cute story. I especially liked the part when Brass called them the "first couple of forensics." I love Brass.

In character! Thank you.

Good story! But if Grissom had just been with Sara, i doubt he would have spoken to her so harshly on the phone.

they r soooo not geeks! they r just...diffrent! i wanna be a CSI when i get older so dont be disin me! any way have you ever seen how hot nick and warrick are? i me *ssss* hot

Wow, you two. What a great story. It's so well thought-out and well written, and the characterizations are perfect. I also loved how you revealed Sara and Grissom's relationship through the context of a case. I can easily see them doing something like this on the show, since they only tend to reveal personal information when it relates to what's going on at work.

In addition to a great storyline, the dialogue you put in here was wonderful. I loved Grissom's quotes, as well as the fantastic interactions between the other CSIs. At the end, Catherine's "It's a righteous shoot" was absolutely perfect! We're all reading at home going, "Darn right it is."

I hope you're planning on teaming up again. You've mastered these characters as well as the feel of the show. I'll beg if I have to! :)

I discovered this story on another site, and am glad to find it here to review it. This is such a great story - you have all the characters down beautifully in every scene. The dialogue is very in-character, you can just picture the whole story as an episode of the show. Wonderful job! Keep writing!

Great story. Loved the G/S dynamics. The Nick/Warrick scenes, esp. in Sara's apartment, were really well written. Write more.

That was great reading. Yes they do make a great couple. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Keep it up.

Kels :)

Wow. An amazing story. I am very impressed by this depiction of a relationship between Gil and Sara. It was understated in the right places (well, maybe the quotation of Shakespeare at the crime scene wasn't understated, but it was a nice idea), and nicely sensitive to the boundaries of the characters. The plot was well-done, especially in the restraint you showed by portraying an existing relationship. Very cleanly written. I do hope that you'll write more about this unusual pair.