it's Lisette! :D heeeeheeee anyways SO THIS WAS AWESOME! Loved iiit, I truly did man your writing is amazing! I wish I can write like that . lol

Thank you for posting this. :)

Anyway, this is appropriately twisted, and even though I think you said you initially wrote this before FE11 even came out, I think you anticipated his characterization there with an eerie degree of accuracy. Poor Nyna.

I get the impression in this that Marth was really offended by his involuntary role in the whole marriage-choice debacle, which is interesting because we never really do learn his feelings about it in canon. Nyna just has a no-win situation on her hands here...

[Some of the paragraph breaks seemed a little weird.]

Lovely as always. As I checked my personal email for any FF story alerts, I saw one for Mark of the Asphodel (who I also know and have an alert of course), and I clicked on it. And I saw your pen name, so I thought, "Wait a minute! This isn't right."

This made me smile, one of my favorite authors writing for another favorite author. Silly me, but it made my brighter.

Anyways, the story is beautiful in it's only little way. I enjoyed this quickie and it's just great. Poor Nyna; I have a little spot for Nyna/Marth too. Glad I wasn't the only one thinking about it. But of course, Sheeda and Marth belong together.

Again, wonderful story altogether.

So um. Dude. This was really kinda sorta completely awesome. XD (TBH the only reason I liked Marth/Nyna in the first place was because of Mark of the Asphodel, and now I can add you to my list of awesome writers of Akaneia. 8D)

I mean, I love entirely effed up dynamics, so this means that this is already fairly high-ranking in my book. And Marth really is an unresponsive block o'ice, isn't he?

[Show something on your face! Anger, lust, pity, anything! Let me know you can show something on your face other than a stoic stare!] Somehow, that's what I really liked most about this piece-and then how a bit later his gaze softens and he becomes more... I don't know, "humanized"? Sorry to fail at being eloquent, I literally only woke up a little while ago.

Anyway, welcome back to the FE section, friend. Hoping to see more awesome stuff from you in the future!

[Xirysa]