I like the fact that Asuza got a little jealous that Yui was being so affectionate with Mugi. It's good that Mugi got some focus, she always ends up being left out.

Anyway, I really liked the story, you seem to be a master of the one-shot!

Awesome Story

Very nice story, good job.

I really liked this. It was a simple concept but your integration of humour supplements the angsty jealousy theme well and stops it from dragging the mood down.

It was also good to see how you portrayed Yui. By all accounts she's one of the biggest airheads of all time but you've given her a crafty, clever side that works very well.

I hope to see some Mugi/Yui in future, since I found myself smiling at their interactions and Mugi-chan definitely deserves a dedicated fic! :P

Aww...I thought that Yui was kinda mean to use that kind of tactic to get Azusa to admit it. Well, it worked, but it seem kinda...mean spirited?

And poor Mugi too, I think somehow she got rather carried away with that too.

But I did think that it was cute! Getting Azusa to wear the cat ears

nice first story. well done.

I can't help but feel sorry for poor mugi though. she always seems to get the short end. she can be too nice for her own good sometimes.

Daaaw. This was so cute. Good job!

thyrokio I think she was slightly hurt by it even though she didn't show it. I read a line in the story that, to me at least.

I liked this story it has a very interest concept, most YuiAzu stories just have Azusa giving in too easily and I like the large pushback on her part only to later realize she loves Yui's affections.

Nicely done, I worried about Tsumugi potentially ending up hurt over Yui's ploy.

I was kinda relieved to know that both were on it.

I love it. So fluffy X3

:] :D XD!

Man it took me a bit to get to this but I am glad that I did.

I thought this was really cute!

I am not a big fan of Yui and Azusa being together, or any other canon pairings come to think of it(kind of limits me)... But this was great.

I kind of had an inkling as to what Mugi and Yui were going to do since the beggining but seeing it play out was just adorable, from shy Mugi to denial Azusa it was all great!

I probably should have picked more uplifting music to listen to while I was reading this though, Coil sets a mood but not the right one for this lol.

Hope to see more.

Condor

A good read, I thought it was all a bit sudden a switch - which was explained at the end. Mugi and Azunyan were done very much in character, and thats the sort of scheme Yui would be involved in.

Improvement/Constructive Crit wise I think Yui was a little 2D character wise - she seemed to mainly spend time clinging to Azunyan/Mugi and act like a child and could have done with a bit more development beyond that. It also moved rather fast but thats hardto avoid for oneshots.

Overall thanks for a good read and keep up the good work.

lawl. it's actually the first time i enjoyed reading a yuiazu fic since i don't really ship the it differs here i liked how azusa realized that she likes yui's attention and i was just kinda pissed at first that she 'rejected' yui's 'advances' to her.i felt bad for

btw,maybe i'm thinking too much,but i felt that mugi wasn't pretending at man,i'm sad for her..i'd prefer mugixyui

tnx 4 d read!