u know wat i hate more then bad spelling people who dont update quickly enough and not using caps when spelling God Jesus He Or Him in referene to God? people who have an awesome fic and then they stop and dont update for yeaars they just stop cold turkey. plz finish u have a good thing going u know the last time u updated this i as 7 and now i am 14. i went through all 5 years of midle school and the remaining 2 years of primry. btw i am on kindle hich sucks to type on so i will not correct spelling. just too tedious. otherwis good speller. so plz plz plz update PLEASe

Very Good keep going!

GO RUSSELL!

good vocab.

Keep up the writing! Regards.

Ps. about the title, I LOVE that sonnet. 116, right?

Aw... Watson is so sad and the kids are adorable!

Mrs. Hudson makes me happy in my SOUL!

hahaha... only Russell would read her children Hansel and Gretl because they'd been wandering off!

I think I'm in love ma cher. I didn't know that there were beings besides my mother and myself who loved King books.

Sonnet 116 is one of my favorites as well.

Thank you for pulling me from that freakish aloneness.

Now we can all be freakish together.

I love your writing by the way; it is very vivid. the dialogu at the beginning is especially good.

OMG- Great story you really captured the chacters please please update soon

amusing
how deep of a discussion can 2yrolds have?

let it flow... who cares if its stupid?

go sit in a fire if u want 2 be scathed...
i decided 2 encourage u :)

Okay, this is NOT a flame. It is constructive criticism. Here goes.
1) I agree with previous reviewers that triplets is a bit much.
2) The dialogue, particularly the opening conversation between Russel and Holmes, is too modern. It's out of character, considering when this takes place.
3) I hate girl fights. Hate them. They're way to cliched. You might consider having Alexia attack Russel without Russel knowing who she is, an building up the suspense?
4) You say it yourself in your story- it's almost TOO reminiscant of the events in BEEK.
Also, I must admit that I prefer Russell pastiches to be in third person, like the books. But I know that wouldn't work well here.
Really, though, it is good and I like it! Please update soon.

What's next? I realy want to find out. You are like so many other writers who's stories will have me unable to relax, sleep, or do anything else. PLEASE finish it.

Most Truly Yours,

Adelaide Kay Holmes

I can handle twins... but quadruplets? My God! One of the reasons why you see lots of multiple births now is due to fertility drugs (which weren't available in the 1920s); additionally, medical technology wasn't advanced enough for early-term babies (which most multiple births are)to have that great a chance of survival. The Dionne quintuplets were famous because they were an anomaly-a first.

NOTE: to many, the appearence of multiples of three or more with no reason in the story for their existence sends off a little "cliche alert".

I'm sorry, but this didn't quite seem to have the *feel* of Russell and Holmes. And ... I know for a fact that normal two year olds do not have that extensive a vocabulary. Are you sure they're not four?