Wow. Wow. That was...interesting. Very funny. Very...interesting. I love it...in its glorious parody-ness.

Very nice.

Wow, I'm in awe! You do the whole Shakespearian thing really well, very poetic. I have long wanted to do an Othello version of Ep 3, but you should probably do it instead. Palpatine as Iago, Obi-Wan as Cassio, the Japor necklace as the treacherous handkerchief - even death by strangulation! Anyway, your story was very creative and well written. Loved it!