 Imminielle 3/31/12 . chapter 5 You cannot even imagine how happy I was when I found out that you had updated your story.
As usual, it is incredibly well-written, captivating, and subtle. Please keep going ! |
 McGonagall's Bola 3/29/12 . chapter 1This is... incredibly well-written. |
 Nan Helgeke 3/26/12 . chapter 5Very interesting story with realistic Snape and Minerva. Looking forward how you develop it further. |
 Noctuas 3/26/12 . chapter 5 YESYESYES! You updated! :D I was actually just thinking about this story last week (!) and if you would ever update it again or if it would be another great, but abandoned story. I really like it and you have a fantastic plot. I especially like the interaction between Severus and Minerva and was wondering - the ever fangirl that I am - if you are going to explore their relation to more, you know besides friendship.. :) I really enjoy the way you wrote the Malfoys. Very believable, and it flows with the way I think of them. The little touches as that both Narcissa and Lucius walked next to each other and neither wanting to loose contact, Draco calling Narcissa 'mum', and you made me wondering how Lucius really thinks about it, you already gave us thing to think about how he views it but how would he speak if he knew Severus's loyalties? Anyway, maybe I'm analyzing things that shouldn't be analyzed, lol.
I can not wait for another well written chapter of yours!
Ah darn! My phone won't let me log in. :/ |
 Swallow B 3/26/12 . chapter 1I am glad you updated, as this is a really good and compelling story. I didn't find anything wrong with the chapter, it put me right back into the atmosphere. You write all the characters well, and I enjoy hearing the Malfoys' side, which is pretty much what I expect it was in Canon.
This is one of the best stories I am reading, so don't feel pressured, but don't give it up. I promise I'll be patient. |
 eternal vampire 3/25/12 . chapter 5It's good to hear from you again. I'm glad to be reading your story again and interested in where your going with this. Can't wait, Take care and have a great night. |
 jimthefishisaninnuendo 12/8/11 . chapter 4well done :) are you going to develop this into a MM/SS? just wondering :D |
 Higurashi-Naku 9/14/11 . chapter 4This is an excellent story! Ah, so Severus has finally been called. I hope we find out what happened to the Slytherins. I am looking forward to the next update! |
 Imminielle 8/26/11 . chapter 4 I just love your story ! Well, in fact, I love all of yours stories ! You picture the relationship between Minerva and Severus so well, and both of them are very much in character, which is something that has become quite rare nowadays ! Cannot wait for updates !
Oh,I nearly forgot : can I asked why your story is rated as M ? It's a shame, since it prevents a lot of readers from reading it ! |
 Illusions 8/5/11 . chapter 4 Aaaah! Cliffie! Please update soon- this is a really well characterized story, one of the best I've read. Update! |
 banshee1968 6/24/11 . chapter 4Enjoying the story. I am greedy and hope for an update soon. Thanks. |
 Swallow B 6/24/11 . chapter 4This is excellent fan fiction. As I think I have already said, the details and the characterisation make the story alive. I feel I am at Hogwarts. Nothing jars me. And you have a compelling plot.
I enjoy seeing Minerva and the other teachers and their interactions so much more than we did in the original. They are fascinating people. I always wanted to know more about them.
I have learned, both while reading and writing fan fiction, that a long wait is worth it, if it means the chapter will be really good. Which this one is. So whenever next one comes out, I'll be very happy. |
 anon 6/23/11 . chapter 4 Thank you for updating this wonderful story! Hope the next one won't be this long, even though I, of course, understand that you are busy. Ah hanging us like this is killing me! Haha and I just love the whole Snape/McGonagall interaction. |
 Shikatema 6/10/11 . chapter 3Hello!
Whyyyyyy aren't you continuing?
Now Severus HAS to apolagise, I mean there is only so much Minerva can take in one day!
Do go on with your idea, I'm really liking it. |
 sammyfish 5/14/11 . chapter 3This is amazing. All your stories are very powerfully written, and I am especially loving this one...Such a strange idea, but you have some amazing character interactions. Please post soon! |