|Reviews for The Fire of the Sun|
| thedragonswife 6/9/13 . chapter 25
The ending was kind of sad, but I really liked this fanfiction! Great job! It's nice to read a fanfiction with good writing.
| stephanie 5/27/13 . chapter 24
You are incredible, thank you so much! I found MotE yesterday around lunch and never stopped reading! I think I may be going slightly insane myself, if infatuation with a fictional character counts! And your writing is so very exquisite to read. It's so comfortable and gets right under your defenses. No pretense and not too flashy, just eloquent and mellifluously wonderful! Ok, enough gushing. But, really, thank you!
| FadingSlowly 5/20/13 . chapter 25
| apolasik 5/20/13 . chapter 7
I absolutely love this story. Thank you for your time and effort u put forth to write it.
| grrrrrr luvr 5/7/13 . chapter 25
u killed charlie sam and quill love the story hate the deaths and paul
why cont paul of died
i feel mean now :(
| snow eopard 5/6/13 . chapter 25
This was an amazing story
I love this, and the movement of the earth. You are totally awesome. I like the twists you've put in there.
I'm gonnakeep reading your story's
| Guest 4/22/13 . chapter 24
I love your work. I seriously need glasses after reading both your stories in a couple of days (while working full time). The only part of the story that I didn't love was Charlie's death. He is one of my favorite characters. I know Bella should have had consequences for her actions (contrary to what SM gave us) but I wish losing Charlie wasn't one of them. I hope to read more of your stories. You are extremely talented!
| Guest 4/22/13 . chapter 22
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| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 7
I have enjoyed every chapter. So much so that I didn't want to stop
long enough to review. This is so good that my eyes are sore. You have put SM to shame. Thank you!
| Joymel 2/21/13 . chapter 7
I love your writing style but I hate "Bella Swan". Consider hand raised.
| Icephoenix321 2/7/13 . chapter 7
PRESENT! God I hate Edward...
| Guest 1/17/13 . chapter 7
Present..And can't get enough...LOL...Great Story
| Sue 1/10/13 . chapter 7
I like your version of the twilight saga more than Meyers. I love your honesty about what a horrible writer she is too! LOL
| Jessica Lahote Black 1/11/13 . chapter 23
The whole deal with paul just really pissed me off. And jakes response? Wtf?! I know he doesnt want alpha but really? Paul would lose. Jake is alpha blood. Hands down jake win! Now im. Just pissed off
| Jessica Lahote Black 1/10/13 . chapter 13
Also wanted to say the cullens are REALLY REALLY pissin me off! UGH!