All you Thirteen fanfic writers are too precious for this world, honestly. I loved it, was not expecting the end though.

I liked this. It's nice to have short stories because you're absolutely right. This movie doesn't get enough credit like it should. I got a little confused at some parts. For example, when you mentioned Evie's thoughts. It kind of threw me off because I understood this was in Tracy's P.O.V. But other than that and a few punctuation errors, it was good. I look forward to reading more one shots/short stories from you :)

This story was quite dramatic(just how i like 'em) and rather realistic since this sounds more like what would have happened to tracy than her recovering

Liked it.

:)