:3 I know why Arty left in the first place. He came to meeee! Love the story, though!

WOW!

EXELENT!

Don't like A/J but this is nice.

Very good fic!

This is good. You never started rambling like some people would. You kept the pace nice and easy to follow. Nothing much else I can wsay. I like the story.

Wow! Great story! I've never read an Artemis/Juliet fanfic before, mostly because I dislike the pairing, but this story was an exception. Wonderful writing, and please keep up the good work!

That was pretty good, considering that it was an A/J. My favorite is Holly and Artemis. But it's good anyway. Keep on writing!^^

Hey! This is wicked! *grins at kitty's general amazing-ness*

Aw. *teardrop* so cute! Arty/Juliet. My favorite couples are Arty/Holly and Arty/Juliet. YAY

OMG! I love that song. Anywho, luv your fic.

eh...cool! I like it! er...yeah! don't worry about the dots, I'm just in a dot mood! ^_^

Awful song, awful pairing. Could this get any worse? If it's any comfort, the writing's still good. But I couldn't read the entire thing without puking. I mean, Artemis and Juliet? I feel sick to the stomach simply THINKING about it. And Britney's spears rubbish tart song Born to Make you Happy is the WORST WORST thing about this fic. Almost as bad as the Juliet/Artemis paring. In other words EW EW EW EW EW !
Kitty, I usually like your writing, but this is...unspeakable.

Artemis - cute?

No, way. He has crows feet, premature wrinkles and... ugh! I can't imagine it.

Read the book and you'll find those word in it.

U people think he's cute because he is charming, intelligent and balh...blah...blah but i totally detest the fact that he is cute.

HAHAHAHA! am i cruel?

...You are a REALLY screwed up person. That is sick. Worse than the Holly/Artemis ones. Sick. Well written and it desplays emotions well, but thee idea is...sick. Ew.

I love to read romance stories between Arty and Juliet...they are my favorit...

Keep writing moore :)