nice

Great story!

Original idea, well written, good characterization, believable plot - knowing Fred and George it could be possible - and with a humoruos touch that leaves the reader wanting for more, specially with the open ending. Should we expect a sequel?

As I said, good job! :)

i like it it's funny, in character, and believable for the potter-verse.

Great story! I liked how empathy was foisted on Draco during his experience as a house elf. I also liked the layered nature of the spell and how it affects the psyche. As a writer, you seem to have made a strong effort to get into a house-elf's mind and to see what makes them tick. The house elf idiosyncrasies that Draco displayed were most humerous. All in all, very nicely done. I like your style and took the liberty of looking at some of your other work- you have quite a knack for humor. Which I admire since I consider it THE most difficult subject. I was particularly inspired by Achille's Heel. The dialogue flowed very well. Keep up the good work.

Cheers,

Truant

This was a really original idea, enjoyed the story a lot!