I've been reading this story for a while now. It's really well written and deserves to be completed. A formidable author like can't suffer writer's block for long.

Please continue! You're an amazing smut writer (i've read your LJ) & your Cloud is awesome... But this has the going's for an epic story! Don't leave it hanging...

This is a really great story so far. I enjoyed the way that you handled the characters, the plot seems to be intriguing, and the writing is wonderful.

If you don't mind and I do apologize in advance if my question seems rude, but may I ask if the story been discontinued? I'll be sorry to hear if it has, but I'm glad that I got to read as much as I did of it and I will look forward to anything else that you might choose to post. I'll obviously have to go take a look at some of your other fics.

Anyway, great job. You're a really talented writer.

I love this! When are you going to finish this? I want to know what happens next - I mean I can imagine - but it's not as good as the author's fantasy! C'mon, even if it's three more chapters left!

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Ooh! I hope you haven't lost your mojo.. Gotta love a hero/damsel story. Please update, i'll be waiting eagerly :)

It can't stop here, can it? *puppy dog eyes* You set up the best cliffhangers, did you know that? I've never found Cloud to be more attractive than when he's furiously angry (other than when he's painfully shy and self-conscious). Him storming into the room made me squeal like a little fangirl. Gethin, you sneaky old Cetra, you'd better watch out! *cackles*

On a sidenote, I laughed at the fact that Barrett who has an artificial hand is actually more handy (pun intended) in the kitchen than Cloud is. I was trying to imagine in my mind how robotic limbs compared to real ones with handling something as delicate as cracking an egg. XD I suppose Cloud can't always be perfect.

I hope you can continue this story! It's oooh so gooooood. I liken it to crack...or in this case: Sand!

"Tifa's waiting. Let's mosey." I almost died from happiness! This is looking to be a very promising story. First chapters are probably the most challenging to write of a story, simply because it has to be paced just right. It wasn't rushed, nor too slow, but it had just the right amount of magic to reel me in! I am now hooked.

I love the way you subtly hinted at the closeness of Cloud & Tifa's relationship. With only a few words you let us readers know that they are past their shy & awkward phase and that they're close enough to share mundane details like the grit in Ms. Groveby's blackberry cordial. Well, you wrote it so you don't need me to re-tell it to you! :)

I've never played DOC, so what I read in fanfics is canon to me! I'm interested in finding out more on this new

One word: EEP!

Wow. I have no idea where this is going, but Cloud is *scary* when in protect/rescue mode. Hope there's more to come!

(I'm starting to get the idea, by the by, that Aerith might not have been the last Cetra, after all. Very interesting.)

I remember this story-must be imported from LJ. I've always been anxious about how it wraps up...it's tough to leave one of my favorite couples dangling in danger! Awaiting more, I am... mc

this is really interesting. moreover, the way you wrote the interrogation was just fabulous! It's subtly trapping :D

Whew! Love this story. The people feel real and the (villain's) plotting makes a cliched "Tifa is kidnapped/Cloud rescues her" concept feel fresh and unpredictable.

This story is amazing! please update soon :)

Love protective Cloud, love the story so far, wish I can leave a more constructive review, but I am useless at these things, but just wanted to let you know I thoroughly enjoy this one and can't wait for your updates!

Ok, this's interesting enough that I'll keep an eye on it. There's elements I don't completely like, (Tifa being kidnapped, Cloud threatening to kill someone in front of the Commissioner with no consequences), but I'm interested enough to keep reading.

Cloud is.. early. wow. I love that aspect of this story, the Tifa being kidnapped part, not so much. I'm very curious to see where this is headed, though you think after Meteor, Reunion, and Deepground, these characters would catch a break. Too bad for them we like them so much.