 Sassy Lil Scorpio 2/8/11 . chapter 1Wow! Very good! I really enjoyed reading this and I'm thrilled to see more Misery fanfics on FFN. I really enjoy your writing style. The fic is very well-written and you paint a very sad picture of how Paul's ordeal with Annie truly broke him, mind, body, and soul. I really like the line comparing the missing body parts to the chunk of his soul that's missing. And I love the chainsaw sounds (rooo rooing). Very good, very sad-just as I'd imagine it'd be for Paul Sheldon, once a well-respected writer, now he's traumatized and now is lying, trying to put his life together and make sense of what's happened to him. Great work! |