I'd like to see how the Harry-with-parents react to all the people staring at him!

Yes, I totally agree with your Riddle re-write. In an alternate universe, who's to say he couldn't have had this much nicer life? And turned out a real swell fella. :D Just a note: When wondering if you should write Creme or Cream, don't get confused and write Crame. It looks really goofy. Go with Cream. The people who are reading in countries where they write Creme, will still understand. :D

Good on you on the Marv thing. That is the most completely original thing I've ever seen! :D And to have him be Minister, and St Mungo's Santa... Bloody brilliant! :D :D

This is blowing me away! This is TOTALLY original. Nothing plaigerised, nothing derivative, everything you have here, fits with your established story line as per summary. Good Lord! Are you majoring in Creative Writing classes? And if you are, you're succeeding wildly... I F-ing LOVE this! :D

This is a bloody work of genius. Thank You. Especially for James & Lily having other kids, which I always figured they would have had, later. Thank you also for spelling Lily's name right. I dream of getting some authors together and banging their heads together, and yelling at them. "Her name is the FLOWER!"

Great story. Just one thing...could you separate what's in happening in the different worlds with a page break or something? It's kind of confusing blended together.

A novel take on the dimension switch idea! I like that you've included both version of Harry rather then just one (although I am getting impatient for Harry 1 to wake up!)'m curious to see what differences come out between the two dimensions (Snape for example). I don't think that its people dislike Harry 2 per say, its just that in comparison to Harry 1 he's a bit boring. I suspect that will change when Harry 1 wakes up and things start falling apart for Harry 2.

"Minister Riddle" -now that's just...creepy. (And in a Santa suit no less!)

I think it is a git. But that just might mena "annoying person who won't leave me anloe and is annoying". I'm not british.

Ok. first, you do know, that if you read the 2nd book, if Harry is 15, then Riddle is 69? I liked this. I want to know what happens, but this is hilariously cute and funny. This is really good.

who tried to kill harry in the other world and why? AK! I have to go to bed. I do want to wake up in the morning before 11. Which means I have to stop reading. ARG! loveing it, by the way!

I asume that Dumbledore told Ron adn Hermione about what happend? Tbhis is great!

I just thought I'd mention that I finally got back to reading your story, about five years after you stopped writing it. C'est la vie.

By the way, you asked about the British Equivelent of Dork/Geek. I'd call them a Wally, as a specifically English phrase.

Nice story so far. I really hope you can update it. The part about "the rest of the woods looked like it belonged on a greeting card," was a very nice analogy. As for your descriptions, I understood them, I believe you did a fairly good job on it originally even without the explanations.

...Did you do the first couple lines on purpose?