|Reviews for Rise of the Lycans|
| grenouille7777 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Interesting and unique premise. I can see any number of different ways you could take this from a minimally altered parallel of canon to extreme AU. I'm looking forward to seeing what direction you take.
| alkkhes 2/4/11 . chapter 1
cool story cant wait to read more. one question are the lycans like the ones from underworld?
| kewr69 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Great start hope to see more soon
| Dark Dragen 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Great start mate, I can't wait to see what yo have planned next... I hope that Harry hasve a few more mates. :P
| George Heichelheim 2/4/11 . chapter 1
A good start. I noticed no misspellings, good grammar, decent pacing and well progressed from premise to promise.
Married - Gringots recognizes them as married because, what? The soul bond? They can detect such? The gods told them? Do the goblins of Gringots recognize them as a 'new species'?
AU - with the deviation from cannon, do you plan a slow divergence JK has established? Or a 'blam' revelation, Harry and Hermione as a couple, Lycans, and soul bonded and have your story take a major detour from the original?
And as(when) Dumbledore finds out, will he rally against it? Or adapt his plans to fit?
Just some thought for you to ponder upon. GH
| topdog19 2/4/11 . chapter 1
love this story please don't be like other authors and quiet half way.
| lrmorena 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Hey the concept is different and catching... Keep them coming.
| Paddy Gurl 2/4/11 . chapter 1
| 1world-traveler 2/4/11 . chapter 1
please update asap
| Jayke 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Very nice beginning! I like that you are trying your hand on a soul bond!HHr fic with a little twist. Your writing style is very comforting to read. The plot seems to be taking an interesting direction.
Hopefully, you have something planned out for what Harry will do with his emancipation, his powers, his link with Hermione. Also, I'd like to see what you plan to portray Dumbledore as, Light?Dark?Grey?Misguided?Helpful?An obscale? Also, what will Ron's reaction be? Will they even tell him? Would Ron exhibit the same prejudice view of the Wizarding World as before?
Looking forward for more! XD
| Sarah 2/4/11 . chapter 1
I can't wait until there are more chapters- this story sounds really promising!
| Cateagle 2/4/11 . chapter 1
Good start with an interesting and somewhat uniaue concept. I enjoyed what you have so far.
On the downside there are spelling errors, mostly homonyms and the occassional dropped letter, but none were too jarring to make the story less enjoyable.
| scottss 2/4/11 . chapter 1
now that a good Lycan story right more please
| loren1989 2/4/11 . chapter 1
interesting story... can't wait to read the future chapters
| narutodragon 2/4/11 . chapter 1
this story has some good potiential don't let it go to waste