Fantastic job. :) You did a great job portraying Diana, definitely.

I am so happy there are more Diana writers. :3

She's my favorite character.

I'm also so happy that there's a new talented writer!

*Huggles* Don't mind me. I just want to greet. :)

GREAT STORY!

I was originally going to review this a couple of days ago, but obviously that didn't happen, so here I am.

The first thing I'd like you to know is that this is such a pleasant change from the Natalie/Henry that's usually posted here - and it's well written, too! Also a pleasant change.

I hope you stay around and continue to write for this section.

Personally, I really like your take on Diana and her emotions. It's kind of perfect, minus the kind of.

So I see that you're really new.

Hi. :)

I really like this. Your style is detailed yet easy to read, and Diana is in character (which is hard to do...well for me anyway...), and I love how you showed things but didn't outright tell us facts. I dunno, it made me really happy. I can't wait for more! I usually vary my sentence structure in reviews, but I don't know why I'm not.

Great start! :3

Can you stay here and write forever? I love this. Please write more soon. The character depth you put into this little chapter just blows me away.

Welcome to the fandom by the way! I'm here if you need anything. :)