At first read, I thought Tohr was in the room. *slaps myself* I liked this chapter because I could finally see/feel the intense jelousy/hate/anger towards someone who was close or intimate in some way with their mate. It bothered me because I'd think 'Its nothing, I would help' but this made me see. I loved the part when Qhuinn had to touch Blay and I felt as if I were him in that moment.

I liked the things/message the priest shared with Butch. It's so hard to grasp things you don't understand. I'm an atheist but I loved this chapter. I could get the point being made and I want to share it with some ppl I know, who has trouble understanding me and what their religion tells them. Thank you.

I have been reading your story for maybe 5 or 6 hrs straight. I had hoped it wouldnt end before more played out between V & Butch. Where did you go? Do you plan to continue this story? I have to know! I have to wonder if authors read fanfiction. I would think it would be the best compliment to their work. To know someone "gets" your characters as they are. I would get a kick out of reading a quote & thinking..." so & so would TOTALLY say that." I, also, loved that you included so many characters in the story. although I did skim to B/Q & V/B scenes, I couldn't help it! Your take on what happens feels the most realistic above any other fanfiction I have read on B/Q. I am getting so excited being so close to their release date, so I sought this out trying to get a fix. It would be a shame if you didn't continue this amazing story. Don't think because we are getting the "real thing" soon that no one will be interested in YOUR story. I definitely won't forget it. It holds a special place in my memory as do each of the BDB books & I desperately want to see it through to the end! A much latet end rather than sooner!

your story is very good, I love it!Do you plan any update soon?
please let us now.I'm dying here for another chapter and I think I'm not the only one!

I like this.

Honestly the only part that really aggarvates me is how Wrath forces Syhren's hand, as if she doesn't have a right to decide where she can live, as if she can't take care of her family and that really pissed me off.

It happens a lot in the original BDB, how females 'supposedly' are strong and how males defer to them but the truth is most of the times the females aren't allowed to do anything without the males permission. They're not allowed jobs or even to bare children! (hint, hint, Beth and Wrath)

But I do like the story and I'll keep reading. I just wish Syhren had the right to make her own decisions, I wish she'd stand up and say 'hello this is my life and my children, I can make my own decision. It doesn't matter that I'm a female and blind!'

MORE SOON

-shadow

I hope there is more to this story. The boys still need to talk about the Scrib Virgins deal. I also want to know what happens between Butch & V.

may I have some more, please? haha

Is there going to be more? I soooo hope that you keep writing! I love how you include everyone in your work! You are an awesome writer with great ideas! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!

I have so enjoyed this series and do hope you will continue. I love how you're dealing with V/Butch - something I know the Warden will never give us, but I long to see. It's not that I dislike Marissa or Jane, I just see the V/Butch bond as having been to strong for the others to ever happen. I like your way of dealing with it and keeping it in canon. Thanks for sharing your time and talent with us!

You really need to update it XDD it was amazing and you kept with Wards style really well

please keep on writing. I love this! I wont to know what happens to v/butch.

HOLY SH-T! I can't wait for more! I have to know what happens.

Butch so needs to get his shit together! I like that the bond is through all four of them, but I'm more into Butch/V than a foursome.

I like Syh and like her attitude, her dominance and challenge that none of the other females really show. Most of them allow the males to walk all over them, make their decisions and everything.

I've never really liked Wrath... and even in this, with him forcing Syh to stay there when she wants to leave? I think it's wrong, even though she's safer. She has the right to make her own choices.

I also never liked Wrath's arrogance. I don't like that he, in the books, TOLD Beth that he was going to sedate her during her needing, so she can' get pregnant. I didn't like him taking away her choice, not even discussing it with her.

Anyway, I really like this story and I'm really looking forward to reading more! One thing? If you know any good Butch/V stories, can you tell me about them? I really like the pairing and can't find many stories.

-shadow

-blushes- you just got a review from me, yelling. Sorry... I just found the story...

-shadow

Awesome snd HOT!

More Please!