Oh, they sound awesome! I actually half hope that Quel had mercy in her personality for this.. Maybe...

Wait-Was that a hint of ZaTr?

*dies*

I like your writing style, and the way you incorporated the entry information into the introduction was clever.

I also like that your characters are kind of immature. That whole "Kneeheading someone's head with my knee" part is adorable. You got the point across that these characters are flawed and not indestructible. This makes them much more interesting to read about.

Do you think Pepper and Mint will be forced to fight each other, or will they be able to fight as a team throughout the entire competition? I'm guessing they'll work together until they're the last competitors left. Then they'll fight each other when there isn't anyone else left to fight...or will they be separated in the beginning and forced to fight solo?