|Reviews for The Sweetest Thing|
| Turkey in a suit 1/14/12 . chapter 1
Love it Really original too
| missysaaa.crystal 5/11/11 . chapter 1
Great written! :)
| ScOut4It 2/13/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story, especially how Jane was so laid back and forward like in this moment:
"Don't fight it," she whispered in my ear. "I know you feel it. It's okay, I do too."
I liked the Alice in Wonderland notes at the end of story too :)
One thing that I would change to minimize confusion when reading is to add a chapter break between when they fall asleep and when they wake up as it was easy to read it as if not much time had passed.
I liked the emphasis being on the coffee shop not being a cookie-cutter chain (although the name for some reason didn't scream 'small business' to me either).
I think you might have one of my votes, but I haven't read them all so not completely sure yet... ;D
Thanks for writing!
| twilightheaded23 2/10/11 . chapter 1
very sweet, good luck in the contest!
| PortiaKhalo 2/9/11 . chapter 1
Coffee, cupcakes, and love notes! The ending made me all giggly. I'd love to read more of this story.
| Jay's World 2/5/11 . chapter 1
It was a nice change, to see Jane portrayed as something other than a hateful bitch; but a sweet and passionate girl. Lovely story, liked it very much!