This is very good Water Toa. I'm very pleased with this. Please update it. (Smiles sweetly) oh and if you have anymore mob trouble, let me know. My sister is the Fire Toa.;)

FINALLLY!

That diary sure brought some questions about it's mystery, if you know what I mean. Hope you update this really soon.

*fires tear gas to disperse mob* ah Kiina...ok, Hiho is kinda creepy. so i guess we get to see a secondary plot!

on Bara Magna, Rahi don't exist. but then again...they DO never say what they call unknown creatures on Bara Magna...

allow me to explain (and point out some spelling/grammar errors) Metru Nui is inside Mata Nui, true, the Toa Metru found a cavern that led OUTSIDE of Mata Nui and then found the ISLAND of Mata Nui, which REALLY was Mata Nui's face. does that help? and some spelling/grammar errors, "Their gone," should be "They're gone," and "seemed too smiled" is seemed to smile" that i all i found.

great i thought you mght have discontinued the story

What happens nexts?

hope you update soon i just cant wait and hope you got my pms

Another human, huh? I thought Roxie will be the only human in this story. Hope you update this soon.

WHY! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END IT IN A CLIFF-HANGER!

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Not bad not bad at all, my only complaint is that the ambush line is " skrall too" not strong too. Keep up the good work.