Oh, this was really heartbreaking! He is obviously so in love with her, but apparently can't give her what she thinks she wants. What can Mr. Perfect Life provide that real love with Edward can't? You should really continue this and make it into a full-length story! It would be so good!

Speechless that was really touching and you could just feel edward's emotion in everything

Really sad! This could totally be a full length story! I'd read it! :)

This was just plain sad and I am not sure I understand what she was thinking when she couldn't just stay with him. You could probably turn this into another amazing long story if you wanted...hint hint. LOL

This is only a OS? I can see where this could be so much more. Great opening.

Hey I found your stories by someone that rec'd! WOW this is very sad and that she is with someone else! You almost don't know if its Edwards pov or Edward is who she is getting Married to. Great writing! Going to read your other stories :o) Chilly x

i loved your story

it made me sad...

... ok i admit it, a little teary as well

hell, who am i kidding? it really made me cry

im a softy, so what?

but back to my point, it was amazing

I read this while listening to the song...tugged my heart very beautiful. Kinda want to know what happens next :)

At first I didn't understand it, then when it got to the end everything made sense. I loved it.

Loved this! It made me sad for him.

Could this have a few chapters in it - go back a bit and then forward some? I would read it!

Looking forward to the new story...

Awww, poor Edward! Such a beautiful O/S - really lovely and I cannot wait till 'I Love You More'!

Best wishes!

amazing!

I've heard this song before, but never truly appreciated it like I did while reading this amazing o/s.

Thank you!

Wow. Didn't see the end coming.