tears of sadness, pity, or joy from this beautifully mournful story, I will never know. This is georgous. Thank you.

great work

Nice idea. Do you think there's going to be some more to write? :)

Wylie

Now that was a tear jerker!

I liked it no I loved it!

OMG...you have to update soon, never seen a story written in this perspective, you have a strong idea and keep up the good work

The ending was quite spectacular. Nice job! :)

Now that was a tear jerker!

I never had much sympathy with Harry because he was just like his father, bullying people, stealing, hexing people and mouthing off to Snape all of the time, if they hadn't given the idiot credit for something Lily did, no one would give a damn about him.

OoO im in awe, so amazing and powerful. i wish i ould write like that, i can only do humer. i think you should make more of these!

I really like this. It's nice to see Snape show some emotion for once, and it's quite realistic to imagine he'd do so on Lily and James's anniversary. I think Harry also reacted just like he would in real life. Hermione was really funny:) One problem I had was with Ron - he was in-character, but there were a few instances where his dialogue came across somewhat OOC. I love that you put Luna in here; she's my favorite character;) The end was extremely moving and written wonderfully:) Thanks for a lovely piece:D

Rae