02-17-11

2241 HRS

This story felt very different than the others that I have read from Nielsen. I am wondering if this particular work

took longer to produce than most others ? This is still a quality piece that is enjoyable to read.

That was good. I kinda wanted it pushed back to before they declared their love so that the onus would be on Hawke to act on his dream. Loved that Hawke would be tongue tied when admitting things on a personal level. Glad you wrote it.

Much better (and it covers a lot more of those interesting questions - like how Katerina got to the States).

Excellent work.

And I really like that Dom dying was apparently just part of Hawke's dream.

Sirius