|Reviews for Pixelated Princess|
| Nalak Stripes 5/8/13 . chapter 6
So the story ends here? What about explaining the origin story of coming from another dimension? Why does it have to be another dimension when she technically did come from a different one, which was from the video game? Why couldn't she just be a regular girl with normal memories? With YOUR choice, that'll that will take more explaining! I hope to see the rest of the story.
| Nalak Stripes 5/8/13 . chapter 4
"The guy looked Spanish, but appearances could be deceiving, as he had a crisp British accent and Dem scratched her head."
-Do you mean Latino? How can someone look Spanish?
"I can't remember. Just kidding, sweetheart."
-If you choose make the character say "Just kidding," make a pause that shows Demetra angry, annoyed, or puzzled.
| Nalak Stripes 5/8/13 . chapter 2
"Quit with the stupid puns."
That wasn't even a pun! Don't use words that aren't in the text. And is "Go" a character? Is "Jo" a character? Is she Josephine? Be specific of name changes or new characters please.
| gorrillaface345 6/30/12 . chapter 2
| jaqjaq123 5/1/12 . chapter 4
well, not many comments, but im keen to see what plays out :D
| meow139 9/23/11 . chapter 3
I love this story!
| RED TIGER SKUNK 7/31/11 . chapter 2
yay more junixdem dem -