So the story ends here? What about explaining the origin story of coming from another dimension? Why does it have to be another dimension when she technically did come from a different one, which was from the video game? Why couldn't she just be a regular girl with normal memories? With YOUR choice, that'll that will take more explaining! I hope to see the rest of the story.

"The guy looked Spanish, but appearances could be deceiving, as he had a crisp British accent and Dem scratched her head."
-Do you mean Latino? How can someone look Spanish?
"I can't remember. Just kidding, sweetheart."
-If you choose make the character say "Just kidding," make a pause that shows Demetra angry, annoyed, or puzzled.

"Quit with the stupid puns."
That wasn't even a pun! Don't use words that aren't in the text. And is "Go" a character? Is "Jo" a character? Is she Josephine? Be specific of name changes or new characters please.

great

well, not many comments, but im keen to see what plays out :D

I love this story!

yay more junixdem dem -