|Reviews for Forgotten|
| tearbending 2/20/11 . chapter 4
I SHIP CAMERON/MIRROR COVERS.
ALSO, KABE. KATHY IS SO GOOD AND SUPPORTIVE AND AMAZING.
BUT FUCK CAMERON.
"YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND." KATHY SAID HONESTLY - BABBLE LETTERS.
"THIS IS NOT GOOD," CAMERON SAID. - SHUT YOUR MOUTH OR I WILL KILL YOU.
THE MIRROR THING REMINDS ME OF THAT ONE EPISODE OF SPONGEBOB WHERE HE AND PATRICK TRYING TO SAVE SANDY'S JOB BY FIXING HER INVENTIONS SO SHE DOESN'T HAVE TO LEAVE BIKINI BOTTOM AND AS HIS INVENTION, PATRICK HOLDS UP A MIRROR AND IS LIKE: I INVITED AN ALTERNATE UNIVERSE! OR WHATEVER. YOU KNOW? I WAS WATCHING THAT LIKE TWO MINUTES AGO.
XOXO ALICE RIPLEY.
| populardarling 2/20/11 . chapter 3
I WANT MORE.
WHAT WAS THAT AT THE END?
I WANT MORE
That is all. :)
| populardarling 2/20/11 . chapter 2
This is a really interesting concept. I always believed if Gabe was alive Nat would be the favorite. :P
For different reasons, but I'm liking this! :D
| iNvIsIbLe GiRl 12 2/17/11 . chapter 3
Once again. GAAAAAAAAAAAAABE!
Hi Dr. Chadwick! Welcome to the clan of doctors! Over here you'll meet Dr. Madden!
Dr. Madden: Girl...*eye twitches*
And Dr. Fine!
Dr. Fine: MY ROBBIE! *huggles Dr. Madden*
Dr. Madden: *mouths* I don't know him...
I like her! She reminds me of my old doctor...very forward, etc...
Speaking of doctor...
Remember that guy who my doctor was trying to set me up with, but he never called me? I found out who he was today. He talks about me all the time to my friend Alexa (they're like best friends but i didn't remember him) and he worked on RENT with my friend Emily. She was talkign about him today. He's a LATIN NERD TOO! He's kind of dorky, but adorable. She has a crush on him. I still have a slight hope that we'll be able to talk. I feel conflicted, but...WHO CARES! THERE ARE GUYS TALKING ABOUT ME! D
This just reminded me of it XDDD
i love how Gabe is acting throughout this...it reminds me of me and especially being someone who's gone through this, it's very acurate and done magnificently!
Big words are fun to use xP
Cameron...i'm on to you...*shifty eyes*
Great chapter once again! Can't wait for more!
| LiveLaughLoveDance4194 2/17/11 . chapter 3
hahahahaha! i luvd the part where gabe called himself batshit and the doctor was all "let's be correct when we refer to bi-polar disorder".
sorry for late review. i was busy with school. (: cant wait to read more!
| tearbending 2/16/11 . chapter 3
HI, I'M ALICE RIPLEY AND TODAY I WILL BE REVIEWING IN ALL CAPS.
._. HIS THERAPIST. INSERT BABBLE LETTERS HERE.
I SEE YOUR COSTCO REFERENCE.
SO I KIND OF DON'T LIKE THE THERAPIST BECAUSE SHE'S ALL PUSHY AND SHIT AND WON'T LET GABE DO THINGS AT HIS OWN PACE, AND ALSO BECAUSE SHE IS EVIL. AT LEAST I THINK SHE IS. I DON'T EVEN KNOW.
I FEEL REALLY BAD FOR GABE STILL, BECAUSE HE'S SO SCARED EVERYONE WILL THINK HE'S BATSHIT. GABE, YOU'RE NOT BATSHIP - MOZART WAS BATSHIT, I HEAR. JUST COME TO ME, GABE. I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND.
THANKS FOR TEASING ME WITH THIS CHAPTER FOR SO LONG. SO LONG AS IN LIKE, THIRTY MINUTES TO AN HOUR. THAT'S LONG, OKAY.
I LOVE YOU, AND SO DOES MY CAPS LOCK KEY.
| lammermeier 2/13/11 . chapter 2
I really like this so far! Please update soon. I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHO CAMERON IS!
| tearbending 2/13/11 . chapter 2
SHOUT OUT TO ME! HEART!
This is kind of reminding me of Fight Club...you know, if the narrator had known Tyler was an illusion. ._.
You already know how I feel about Cameron.
Also, Gabe/Kathy friendship. Heart.
| daughterofair 2/13/11 . chapter 2
"The memories that went hand and hand with the pictures seemed fake. As if it was another little boy holding his sister, blowing out birthday candles, and smiling awkwardly at his eighth grade graduation." - that whole paragraph was absolutely stunning.
This chapter really got me hooked. I love it so far, your writing is beautiful, and there are countless perfectly written parts of this story so far. I completely envy you for that. I adore the way you're writing Diana and Gabe's relationship, and Cameron really has me intrigued. So far I can tell you're going to take this story somewhere incredible - I think it's a really interesting idea that you obviously know how to write for! Perfection so far, can't wait to see what comes next!
| iNvIsIbLe GiRl 12 2/13/11 . chapter 2
I love this i love this i love this.
i love how AU everything is. I love AU popular Nat...oh my God. She sounds like my sister!
CLEANSE YOURSLE NATALIE! DON'T END UP LIKE HER!
Natalie: *backs away slowly*
XDD i saw a reference to James. RYAN AND JAMES. I love those two. They're the Rosencrantz and Guildenstern of N2N!
Dude, i had more to say, but i was just so swept up in this awesomeness that i just can't...
WONDERFUL JOB! Can't wait for more! D
| Natalie Thropp 2/12/11 . chapter 1
This sounds great! can't wait to read more
| greengirl16 2/6/11 . chapter 1
One: It's a Gabe story which means I automatically love it.
Two: It has an intriguing plot so far so another love from me! :D
Three: It's original :D
Triple yays and loves from me!
| tearbending 2/5/11 . chapter 1
Hi I love you and this :3 Because you're perfect and it's perfect, and I love AU.
So, yeah. Write more.
| populardarling 2/5/11 . chapter 1
I'm sure that's what you intended. It's a good confusion, though! :)
There was just one typo. :)
He woman's- The* :)
I can't wait to see where this is going! *Huggles*
Love, your mother
| iNvIsIbLe GiRl 12 2/5/11 . chapter 1
Dear Bluey/Emmy/PenPal/Bestest Buddy,
ooooooooooh.I like this.
So SciFi-esque sounding.
Poor Gabe! He seems very upset...Poor dear... i'm sure things'll get better in the next chapter!
Come on now. Turn that frown upside down.
Gabe: Make me...
Henry: YES! *grabs shock collar*
Gabe: OK FINE!
Henry: Aw, dammit...
Great story! I'm guessing there's more? Can't wait!
Anna/Rissy/Invisible Girl/Agricola Fredericks