|Reviews for Hominid's Brother|
| John Yeller 1/12/13 . chapter 1
Even though this (short) story lacks moral detail,it counters that fact with a good storyline!
| FlyingStrawberry 2/5/11 . chapter 1
This story is rather confusing, you need to write it in a way that the reader would understand too.
Also when you are writing if the number is not a double digit number such as 10 it should be written in letters.
For example: 2 should be two.