Good story so far. I like how you didn't make the Metatron the bad guy, like they do in most fics.

There are many possible words for this fic, but I feel the word that suits it best is brilliant.

You are so cool.

This story makes me happy in every aspect. Thank you for writing and posting it. :)

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- Kara

That was good. You pined those two nicely. I found the first chapter was a bit long as an intro though. A bit over explained perhaps.

Yes, hugs! XD Lovely ending, there.

Your red-headed Lucifer quite reminds me of the one in Diane Duane's first Wizard book... Except, not so beautiful, and not so absolutely, malevolently evil. I like him!

"He pulled Walter up by his perfectly normal, five-fingered hand."

Yay! ;D Aziraphale fixes everything!

Burnt hand, missing pinky... Hastur's not taking very good care of his belongings, is he?

“I can’t say I’m too surprised,” said the Lord, affably. “He’s very charming. Could probably charm the pants off of anyone.”

*nods* Even as a fictional character!

"Galvanized into mental action, the angel quickly came up with the most obvious solution. He was an angel. He’d just heal Crowley."

Oh no! Aziraphale has the right attitude, but he's going to kill Crowley! *winces*

" He knew Crowley liked napping but surely the demon would know better than to fall asleep in the rain."

Hmm. He did sleep through a century before, but he was probably someplace more comfortable... I bet there's a good story in that.

Excellently dramatic chapter! *keeps reading*

It's strange: I love Crowley dearly, but it is very entertaining to read stories where he gets into trouble... He's such a cocky demon, I suppose.

*claps* O, nice chapter! The bit about benzene and ventilation hoods was interesting, too.

Oh, well done, Hastur! XD

This sounds like it's going to be a vey interesting story. You writing style is delightful to read and your characterizations are wonderful. I look forward to reading the rest of this

Oh wow! really, wow! This has got to be one of the best fics i've read on here, no joke! You've really got the characters off, just write more and more!