Wow, I'm glad I stopped by your page. First off, this feels as though it could have been an episode itself. Very twist-y and turn-y and fast paced. Glasgow is pretty intriguing. I can picture his cat and mouse with Lelouch and its a going to be a very thin line for Lelouch, who I can see manipulating Glasgow for his ends(and Glasgow turning the tables when Lelouch underestimates him or a plan falls through). It reminds me of the plot where a docter studies a psycho and becomes obssesed enough to be seduced into killing by the psycho. I really like the idea that Glasgow and Jeremiah(Yay that he's in this) are old friends, which makes me want to know more about Glasgow-esepically what he knows about the Kururugi family.

Speaking of Kururgi-I hope Suzaku is said obstacle and that he and Lelouch manage to talk honestly to each other at some point. (Maybe even about what really happened with Euphie, but thats a stretch) and just what Suzaku will do when he learns about what will happen. I like that their relationship was called in here; I like these two very much.

Btw, loved the Lelouch snark and sneaky Lloyd who has a very long name. I hope we get to see more of him. What I'm curious to know, is if this will be a sout of re-vamp of R2? Please continue with this one.

Very interesting indeed, the story plot line is good, charters stayed the same way while the OC has a wonderful personality, I do wish you to continue, people will love it, don't get discouraged by the number of reviews, once you lay everything out, people will get attracted to the story and like it.

Thank you.

Nice job!

So far, I like Vincent's personality. Also, I like how you presented Lelouch. Though there are a few spelling and grammar errors, these are tolerable. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. :)

Very interesting first chapter, can't wait to see what you have planned.

Vincent Glasgow? That''s an...interesting name.

Nice work!