IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE THIS I WILL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH OF AGONY AND DESPAIR! Nah, I'm just kidding. Probably. Anyway, this story is so damn freaking AWESOME!

I think this story could have a lot of potential, and the writing is quite good so far! I'm looking forward to seeing more!

pretty good, I liked how u showed Ridley can show emotion. Is this a intro and you'll be writing more or is this all? If you plan to continue (which i would love it if you did) please tell me! I am also about to begin a fan fiction of my own D (metroid of course.) Right now i'm waiting for my account to activate but my account will be under the name I wrote above.

The beginning is promising keep it up

Sweet sweet sweet. Freakin' awesome. What else is there to say? My favorite villain is, you guessed it, Ridley and I love this take on him. hope to see another soon. like within the next couple days. But, no pressure.