Ling is OOC. Poor Kai.

Interesting. This looks good.

Well it looks like Kai is in the very situation that she ran away from Xing for... I bet Ling is really pissed off at this point, I can't wait for him to make an appearance! XD

Man, Greed's a sadist!

THAT WAS FUCKING SEXY.

Is it bad that I'm saying that? But seriously, that was just... Delicious.

I wasn't sure what to think of this chapter, other then how hot Greed was in it. And hes a douchebag. But still.

That 'little Goddess' part you threw in there made me go 'awh sh-'. And unfortunetly my sister was in the room, and I had to explain to her the dramaticness that is this story. In the end she just ignored me, but comeon. She so wanted to hear about the drop dead sexyness that is Greed and Ling.

I cannot wait until the next chapter, dear God. This fanfiction is amazing.

-Mizora

OH MY RUBBER CHICKENS. THAT WAS HOT.

I was considering having a nosebleed, but then I'd have to explain to my dad just why I had blood gushing down my face, and I couldn't really tell him it was because I got slightly turned on by a fictional character in a fanfiction now could I? XD

Great chapter! The little goddess bit was a really good add-in. Poor Kai...I feel bad for her...

I didn't find any major mistakes in this chapter, but then again I was kind of focusing on Greed's extreme sexiness. What can I say? I'm a sucker for the avaricious type! /

Can i slap Greed? ...wait, then i'd be slapping Ling...and i don't want to slap Ling. Damn, then how the hell can i hit Greed without hurting Ling in the process...argh. Anyway, i like it...but she better get a shot at kicking Greed's ass.

OMG... Greed just went against his creed of not hurting women... *Dramatic SpongeBog gasp* HOW COULD HE! *Dramatic SpongBob tears, then suddenly stops*

Anyways, at first I was kinda confused with how you skipped an episode, but I gradually caught ON. And boy what an eye opener this chapter is, I love it! And I can't wait for the chapters when Ling regains his body, that'll be sweet, angsty, romance goin' on between him and Kai. And are there gonna be chapters when you Greed and Ling talk and we, the readers, get to see Ling's thoughts on what's going on?

Update again soon!

this story is really good. :3 i love ling to death.

Gr-Greed... sniffle... You bastard! You were my favorite! Now you get second place...Envy gets fist.

Anyways love the story. Greed is not OOC he is totally IC.

Sigh...poor Kai. I know how you feel!... no not really...-_-'

Yesh! Greed! Fangirl squeal. Let the fun begin! XD

Grrr! Those bastards...

Well, maybe staying with Greed will be better than being eaten... hopefully. XD

Oh boy, she's going to see Father! She is right? I'll read the next chapter to find out! XD

I was extremely excited when I saw how fast you updated, cause I really wanted to read the next chapter after I read that last one.

And you were right, that was a good chapter. Greed finally came into the story, and I really liked how she responded to that. I mean, she was all portective and like,

'seriously, I just started to like this guy and now your going to force me with some fake wearing his skin?'

And I wonder what Ling is gonna say to her, cause you know, whenever he takes over to say something and such.

Greed is so sexy, and then you give him Ling's body? All the more attractive. Except, you know, Ling is a billion times bettter then Greed, but still, he's a close second.

Well, i'm SUPER excited for the next chapter now, things picked up and I wanna read as it keeps on rolling. Haha :D

Update soon! I shall be waiting...

-Myah