So cute! I love it.

Love this story! Characters were- well, very in character and I liked the details of your story. Cool how the boys apperance is in the same style of the Gullwings. Cool and unexpected read- how about a meeting between the Crimson Faries and the Gullwings? :D

Cute story. The crimson squad seem very in character even as fairies. I love your attention to the little details, acknowledging that Gippal and Rikku are both Al Behd and that Baralai doesn't like machines.

Nice... the crimson faeries Very in-character.