Whoa, easy there, Cloud. :D

Your writing style is lovely. It's pleasant to read since there are less dialogues and more descriptions. I'm in awe; it is so clean and... just wow. Four reviews?! Are you kidding me, people?! This definitely needs more reviews. /faved

this is one of the hottest cloti fic that i've ever read. and they just kissed! something about a jealous cloud and a breathless tifa just makes a hot fic. well done, this deserves more reviews.

you should add more to this it would be so awesome and it would probably make alot of people happy .

Aww! SO cutee! Everyone loves a jealous Cloud! ;P Very good story!

very good mine cloud