This is a very good! I find it interesting how you made it from Pansy's perspective but I think that was pure brilliance on your part. It made the story much more enjoyable, seeing it from an outsider's point of view. I do hope you continue to write.

-Carina Jones

I just love your stories! Can't wait to see more from you!

I liked this view of Slytherins, it was certainly interesting. I'm not usually a huge fan of this pairing (not that I have anything against homosexuality), but I really enjoyed the way Pansy approached the whole thing and hearing her thoughts. The writing was clear and concise, descriptive but not tenuously so. A pleasure to read. Well done!

Sarcastic Spirit

nice story!