Look you must continue to post chapters! Don't be discouraged by lack of reviewers...some people are just too lazy to write reviews...keep writing my fellow story writer

This is a really good story! U have such a wide range of vocabulary! I wish it had talking in it thought but it is really good!

Ah, this is absolutely beautiful! Wonderful job! I especially liked the ending!

i think you should make at least one more chapter, but would still be good if you left it alone.

Personally, I think you should leave it as a one-shot. It feels like it's finished. Sometimes a little ambiguity goes a long way.

However, if you still feel the need to release some of the creativity inside your inner author, you might do a separate companion piece telling the whole story of what happens after this.

I totally think you should write another chapter! It feels sort of...unfinished.