What a great story! I don't understand why you aren't getting more reviews; you are such a terrific author. I hope that continue writing more in the future.

*squeals* This is so sweet its unreal, I LOVE IT!

It was so good, It was great!
I loved it
Thank you
Please write more romantic fic like this one it was absolutely great

I've added you to all my fave list and am always reccomending your stories Even if I dont alway reveiw (So so so so so so Sorry I will try harder to always reveiw, Becuz you work so hard to write the fics) please continue to write work of exceeding qualtiy thank

Chibminshiy, a loyal dbz fan and a k/19 fanatic

Oh, this was SO sweet! I loved it. I've never read a K/18 wedding night fic. Nicely written as well. Great job.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww how cute i like how u capture the sweet side of 18 now i miss my boyfriend(as if i din't miss him already) he won't be back till tomorrow waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Oh that was so nice. Well written and a pleasure to read.

ooohhhh...absolutely beautifull (sorry I didn't find this sooner been totally unwell...but hey I've found it now eh ^__^) As usual it was just absolutely perfect *sigh* just the perfect thing to smile to.
I... *jumps up excitedly fist in the air*...Looooovved it, yeah! *claps excitedly* it's all like 'oh wow!' you know. ^__^

Interesting little semi-read. Nice extra personality traits like Android Number Eighteen's power generator giving off weird sensual tingles... Krillin sleeping while wrapped around a pillow... creative aspects like that. I like it, however brief it may be, but the whole thunder and lightning storm really concludes the passionate mood. ...Uh-huh...

That was sweet...you have a great talent for writing. I hope to see more works from you in the future!

OMG that was beautiful! one of the best K/18 fics I have ever read!

OMG!! SOOOOOO KAWAII!!! U R SUCH A GOOOOOOOOOD WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!! DID I MENTION KAWAII!!!!

nice, kute

Oh, that was so sweet and insightful. A very believable account!

Wow, that was so good. I absolutly loved it. Please write heaps more K/18's cause they are the best couple and FF.net need more fics on them. Keep up the great work. ~Deadly Beauty