|Reviews for The Pokemon World Series|
| Tinna Minor 9/19/12 . chapter 10
I just found your story while looking for a combination of Real and Pokemon, and I must say, you've gotten almost everything on the head in my mind (I was really looking for a story about modern life, but this is pretty cool).
I was wondering if you're still taking OCs, cause I might have a few if there are still slots available.
| Illuminating Rainbow Light 9/18/12 . chapter 10
Another excellent chapter, KKid and Titanic X! Everything is just getting more and more exciting, I can hardly stand it! I look forward to your next updates.
| the Red King 9/9/12 . chapter 10
Great chapter as always kid keep it up.
| the Red King 8/12/12 . chapter 9
So Satoshi Taijiri is nickname Red in this version of the Pokemon world? And also uses the same nicknames as Red from Adventure/Special manga. Great chapter keep up the good work.
| Tendou Souji 8/11/12 . chapter 9
Well, this was a surprise. I was randomly browsing through the site until this story just so happened to appear before my eyes. This was a very good chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing how you interpret the earthquake scenario in Japan. Bonus points for the inclusion of Red.
OCs next chapters? I hope that one of 'em is mine. Fingers crossed.
| Souja O 7/29/12 . chapter 8
Is it weird that I feel like I learnt something from this? It's actually quite a cool feeling, to be honest XD
*"Anything else you want to say about him?"
"…You guys can edit that out, right?"*
Collette's interview was definitely my favorite
| the Red King 7/9/12 . chapter 8
Very interesting so the next arc will be about the Disaster in Japan. Now i'm really interested to make my OC. I should send it to you via PM great chapter and keep up the good work Ketchum I expect great things from this fic.
| Guest 7/5/12 . chapter 6
Um idle if you allow but I can provide two OCs if you allow me.
| wazabine 6/10/12 . chapter 7
interesting storyline, using real world meshed in Pokemon for the olympics.
for your world, I guess pokemon or humans apparently haven't ended each other lot sooner and managed to come up with a better cooperative relationship. (hopefully)
Shouldn't George be technically charged for denial of medical assistance, and harassment of Team USA? I know the USA Team technically did start it but he first denied medical assistance and also tried to block their leave.
LT. Surge and the witnesses of these should do something about it.
| the Red King 6/9/12 . chapter 7
Great chapter really liking where this is going.
| JapanDreamer09 5/6/12 . chapter 6
Hmm, I totally forgot to review for this chapter. Sorry about that KKid.
I'm glad to see this story being picked up again. I was sad when I thought this story was going to be discontinued. Great to see a collaboration between you and Titanic X.
Anyways, I'm a little bit hesitant seeing real life people and organizations incorporated into the story but I guess I have to wait for more chapters before I make an opinion.
Whoo! Great to see my character (despite the fact she is on the 'bad' guy side) actually winning a battle for the team. And what's with this secret that she found out about TK? Gah! Cliff hanger! XD
Good luck and I look forward to the next chapter.
| Doku-8888 4/14/12 . chapter 6
I wanted this to happen for so long.
Actually, it's been so long, I've forgotten where the list is for needed OC's. I'll try to get another one to you ASAP.
Thanks for uploading, and I suppose I should send a thank you to Titanic X too.
| The Duelist of Dawn 2/26/12 . chapter 1
Here's a revised version of my OC:
Name – Raven Hardy Molina
Nickname – Hardy
Age – 23, 5/30/88
Hometown – San Juan
How many years as a trainer – 8 years
Hair – Black, short, military styled.
Eyes – Green, kind
Body type – Muscular
Height – Average
Skin tone – dark
How they act towards friends: Shows the amount of respect and friendly
How they act towards strangers: Silent until approached, trying to be friendly
How they act towards their Pokemon, and other Pokemon: Affectionate towards own, willing to be kind to others
How they act towards enemies: Becomes wary, and looks at them with calculating eyes
How they act towards rivals: Shows respect and acknowledgment
Overall Personality: Respectful and kind to all people, except his enemies
Release phrase – "(name of Pokemon), it's your time!"
Return phrase – "Come back, (name of Pokemon)!"
Everyday clothes – a red bandana around his neck. Blue jacket, shirt with a red star on it and jeans with black sneakers
Team uniform – I will ultimately decide what they look like, but you have the following choices: no hat, short sleeves, pants, low socks, fingerless
Swim wear – Black trunks, Black goggles, dark blue towel, black flip flops, dark blue beach bag, black sunglasses.
PJ's - dark blue robes and slippers, black long sleeved, buttoned-up top with matching bottoms.
Formal clothes – White dress shirt, tan khakis, brown dress shoes
Training clothes – white sleevless shirt, dark blue shorts, white short socks, and black running shoes.
Winter clothing – dark blue coat, black hat, black snowboots, black gloves with a white stripe around the wrists.
Accessories – what it is and where it is worn (none with team uniform).
History – Eldest of four children. Born from a North American father and a South American mother. Attended school until graduating at 2006. Even then, had taken care of an abandoned Teddiursa during school. After graduating, had time to train and travel a lot more than the usual summer seasons. His family was behind him when he decided to become a Pokemon Trainer. He also has a history of catching more female Pokemon than male.
Family - One sister, two brothers, mother and father.
Hobbies – Writing Stories, Training with Pokemon, reading at libraries
Likes – Books, his Pokemon, friends, family, music, training, video games
Dislikes – Anyone who badmouths his family, friends, and Pokemon, thieves, sore winners, making too many mistakes
Personal belongings – Book of World Maps, digital camera, boxing gloves, photo album
Brave Nature, Loves to train with his trainer in hand-to hand combat. A lover of combat.
Moves: (Facade, Bulk Up, Superpower, Strength, Scary Face, Yawn)
Additional: Has an X-Shaped Scar in the circle on his body
Relaxed Nature, Patient and likes to play defense in battle. Usually a peacemaker between any fighting between Raven's Pokemon, likes to let Raven on her back.
Moves-(Frenzy Plant, Giga Drain, Earthquake, Curse, Synthesis, Hidden Power)
Naughty Nature, The "Princess" of Raven's team. Flirts with male Pokemon and usually seen on Raven's shoulder if out of her Pokeball, has a crush on her trainer. Best friends with Gaia, cunning and playful.
Moves: (Night Slash, Swords Dance, Ice Punch, Double Team, Brick Break, Attract)
Adamant Nature, like a bird she is free-spirited. She also likes to challenge herself against new opponents.
Moves(Close Combat, Brave Bird, Roost, Endeavor, Aerial Ace, Double Team)
Serious Nature, Tomboyish, has a respect for Raven but not as affectionate as the other Pokemon are.
Moves: Brick Break, Surf, Hypnosis, Bulk Up, Ice Beam, Giga Impact)
Ability: Water Absorb
Modest Nature. Loyal since the day, Raven caught her as a Ralts and shares a telepathic bond with him. Loves to dance.
Psychic, Calm Mind, Thunderbolt, Focus Blast, Heal Pulse, Energy Ball
Mild Nature, Tough to handle and usually spends his time by himself. But a loyal friend.
Moves: Dragon Claw, Flamethrower, Shadow Claw, Smokescreen, Toxic, Air Slash
Bashful Nature, startled by a new face until he gets time to know someone. Shares berry juice to those he likes.
Moves: Power Trick, Rock Tomb, Rock Polish, Bug Bite, Withdraw, Power Split
Additional: Shiny Pokemon
Jolly Nature, despite her dark look she's sometimes playful. It can watch she own strength when she does.
Moves: Tri-Attack, Work Up, Reflect, Fire Blast, Dragon Tail, Thunder Wave
Sassy Nature, Her mind is always out to lunch and agrees with whatever Raven says.
Moves: Counter, Mirror Coat, Encore, Destiny Bond
Ability: Shadow Tag
Quirky Nature, Plays tricks such as turning into other people. Because he's male, he prefers turning into other guys, mainly Raven
Moves: Pursuit, Nasty Plot, Hone Claws, Night Daze, Foul Play, Faint Attack
Hardy Nature, A smart Pokemon, ready to use whatever moves of the Pokemon he transforms
| AndromedaAI 2/17/12 . chapter 1
Do you need any more OCs for this story?
| JapanDreamer09 8/11/11 . chapter 5
Oh man, now I'm terrified for Charlotte. What is it about her that makes her become a target? O.O Even George is terrified of the mysterious man. Run Char! Run!
And as for my other OC, I officially hate her... and I was the one who made her... lol. I guess that's a good thing.
Moving on, I notice this before in the other stories, but I think (I'm not sure) that having speech dialogue beginning like this "..." is not grammatically correct. I don't know. I've read several books but never seen dialogue that started like that so you might want to look into it.
Speaking of dialogue, I would like to see more of it in the story. I think it would make things more interesting but this is totally your call. You do a pretty good job in descriptions so I say that is a good improvement.
So 13 on 13 Pokemon match... This is gonna get ugly (somewhat). I can definitely imagine something going horribly wrong. Still, I'm looking forward to see how they battle.
Can't wait for the next chapter.