I'm going to read this to my children at night so that they will learn how NOT to write poetry.

Ah! Nice...

Do you love ORLICK?

George (the alter ego): STOP. ASKING. PEOPLE. THAT.

Broadwaypoetess: But-but-but! Her penname is Slytherin Dreams! She must like evil!

George: Now, you assume the author is a girl!

Broadwaypoetess: How many male authors do you see? I see a handful in each sections, so I'm ASSUMING, dammit! Most authors and most SLASH writers are girls! Duh, It's called researching!

George: Fine...

Broadwaypoetess: HA! I mock you George!

George: *sighs* I'll give the Orlick URL.. which is on your page, seing as you're his only fan... . ...

Broadwaypoetess: Good. *pats George on the head*

Again, GREAT! Very dark.

That was so good! Estella rocks my world.

"I'm like Estella. I like to reel it in and then spit it out..."

I love G.E. You have definitely captured Estella's character well. Was the "two endings to thy tale" line in reference to Dickens' ending and the reworked ending of the book?

Wow! That is awesome and sounds so much like Estella (or at least what I know so far. I'm reading it for English and haven't finished yet.)

bravo! It truly reveal Estella's cold behavior...I never did like her.

Very true. Very beautiful. The stlye and language only enhance the poem's beauty. Write more.

Oooooooh! That's good! I love poetry but I suck at it, so it amazes me that you can write a poem so good about Estella's character.

This stayed in character with Estelle and her style of speaking. Very nicely done. Very dark and reflective. I hope you write more.