Why do I get the feeling I saw this somewhere else before? Must be my mind playing tricks on me again. Other than that, I liked it. Hotaru is just so underappreciated... She needs luv, too!

I have to agree with Celestia GF on this one. Love how this is more explicit. I also enjoy your Minako and Hotaru tales as I really like that pairing too. I must say though, I'm intrigued by the comment about Minako and Michiru. I just want to let you know, if I wind up writing a story with a MinaMichi pairing, I'm blaming you, shane-sensei.

Write from the heart!

-LF1080

I liked this story.

Now THIS was a GREAT STORY! And I do hope that you do a second part. These two make a HOT couple!

Hooping!

Do you ever write ANYTHING that isn't an exact carbon copy of the hundreds of other listless fics you've bloated the femmeslash community with?

Love your Tales of Minako and Hotaru series, and this more explicit version is great as well. Would love to see more to this as well. As always, love your work and can't wait to see more.